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Barbara Writes
Barbara Writes
Nov 10, 2008 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Forever Friends (Acrostic)

Forever Friends

Finding real friendships
Open doors once closed
Relationships shared
Even under hardest of times
Vices and traps
Ensnare virtue
Robbing all that was good

Finding positive aspects
Rising from the ashes
Indescribable words
Etched on blood stained hearts
No mountain too lofty or river too
Deep can break the bond
Shared between true mates

— Barbara Writes, Nov 10, 2008

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Region, Country: United States, USA

Favorite Poets: Billy Collins, Shakespeare, , Emily Dickinson, , , Whitman, Jess Tapper

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infinite_dwarf

infinite_dwarf

17 years 7 months ago

Wow

You have this format down pat! One question: blood stain hearts or blood stained hearts? I think the stained works a little better. Nice Job! ~Jess K. ---------------------------------------------------- -"When I was strong, strong in the sound thought I'd see when day was done. Now I'm weaker than the palest blue Oh so weak in this need for you" - Nick Drake
Barbara Writes

Barbara Writes

17 years 7 months ago

Thanks Jess k

the change has been made and thank you for reading and liking it. your opinion matters as you are a really good poet. Respectfully Yours, Barbara
Barbara Writes

Barbara Writes

17 years 7 months ago

Thanks

Glad you like it your comment is appreciated. Respectfully Yours, Barbara
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Lonnie

17 years 7 months ago

Beautiful poem!

I'm not familiar with the form, but know what I like when I see it! Bravo!
Barbara Writes

Barbara Writes

17 years 7 months ago

Thanks Lonnie

Glad you like it. It is new to me too. I am writing many, practicing much to get better. It most hard for me to write taking a while to write just one. I have many i am working on back and forth until i get one right. That way I won't get burn out on one from trying too hard. I have others posted you might like to read. Respectfully Yours, Barbara

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