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louiemary
Nov 17, 2008 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Treasures

Treasures
Diamonds and gold
Drilling and digging now
Shouting for joy and going for more
Precious
— louiemary, Nov 17, 2008
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Janice Pearce

Janice Pearce

17 years 6 months ago

Treasures

louiemary, I think with some expansion on this one, it would make for a better read. But this could be just me~ _____________________________ To write a touching poem, you must gently stir the soul, if it brings forth tears or smiles, then the story was beautifully told. ________Janice Pearce_________

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