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Dec 10, 2008
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World or stars
I could be content
at one with this world
one with everything
as the Dalai Lama says
when he orders a hamburger
Or I could wish
pray
hope
that we might physically reach the stars
for racial survival
that big meteor is statistically
only a few millennia away
maybe less
aye there’s another classic rub
do we survive the planetary sacrifice
required
it seems
to reach the stars?
don’t ask me
heya
heya
heya
I’m just this bloke
you know?
I want the stars
I want me
and I want you too.
— weirdelf, Dec 10, 2008
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Critiques
Kailashana
17 years 6 months ago
Yeah… I know the feeling
Ink Dragon
17 years 6 months ago
Has your muse crept back to you?
infinite_dwarf
17 years 6 months ago
Jess
orgami
17 years 6 months ago
Love this poem
whitetea
17 years 6 months ago
dalai lama ordering a
weirdelf
17 years 5 months ago
thanks all, I seem to be devoloping a bit of theme
washing tears
17 years 5 months ago
nice job on this one, i love
weirdelf
17 years 5 months ago
oh and I have dropped that bitch, my muse
Quillsvein1
17 years 5 months ago
what a
Cindy Lou
17 years 5 months ago
Do you ever feel
Sinbadthesailorman
17 years 5 months ago
Oh Baby the stars
Sinbadthesailorman
17 years 5 months ago
Hey I thought the dollie was a veggie guy
weirdelf
17 years 5 months ago
quill, cindy, sinbad
prayersbyPatty
17 years 4 months ago
Are you still taking LSD?
weirdelf
17 years 4 months ago
tit for tat?
IKnowNoBox
17 years 4 months ago
World Of Stars
Conect11
17 years 4 months ago
the only thing
briansgate
17 years 4 months ago
Jess,
Nordic cloud
17 years 4 months ago
The ants
weirdelf
17 years 4 months ago
I read a story about a hyperintelligent
pleiades
16 years 1 month ago
i love this! not exactly
weirdelf
16 years 1 month ago
ta p
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