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docmaverick
docmaverick
Jan 04, 2009 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

You Move Me...

You move me...
to a place I could never reach
on my own.

You move me...
to emotional heights
and I have grown.

You move me...
the other day when you called me
your best friend,

and you moved me...
with your love and compassion,
once again.

You moved me...
to the knowledge that caring for others
supercedes "will".

Then you really moved me...
to fourth, between "A" and "B"
in Victorville!
— docmaverick, Jan 04, 2009

About the Author

Region, Country: The High Desert, in the wild west, southern California, U.S. of A.., USA

Favorite Poets: Keates, Poe, Dickinson, and Dr. Seuss. There are a smattering of others, but why bother listing 'em all, ya know?, I also rely on a few of our poets, here....for advice, and what not. I couldn't possibly explain what a fountain of live, effective knowledge we have...right here in our midst ! To catch a glimmer of brilliance, merely visit: the Stream.

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Barbara Writes

Barbara Writes

17 years 5 months ago

Great

I thought it flowed well from beginning to end. Nice write i enjoyed the movement of passion in this poem. Respectfully Yours, Barbara

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