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3 Poems of January 18, 2009

3.   Cosmic Dancer

in the eye of a chameleon
the change of skin
in the eye of a hurricane
the vortex of stillness
in the eye of the Beloved
the mystical heart,
from where the river flows
and the cosmic dance begins...


2.  American and Proud Of It

I have lots of coffee mugs,
don't remember where they came from
more often than not,
yesterday, while drinking my morning coffee,
the one with the American flag
on one side and the other,
these words:
"American and Proud Of It."
now, I don't know about you,
but I haven't been proud of America for
a long time I think,
I've been pretty much lost in a state of confusion,
how can my country 'tis of Thee,
sweet land of liberty
send billions of dollars to the newly oppressor
State of Israel,
why the bailouts for banks and car companies,
aren't the jobless
and the homeless who are
the ones suffering?
I've never seen a company suffer
but by the downfall of its arrogant
greediness
fat cats imprisoned only when
caught squirreling away
millions, stolen from other fat cats,
so from the ashes of yesterday
from the cries of the victims of
blind-eyed, deaf-eared, politics-as-usual
the cries of the long nights,
of white-phosphorous bombs, falling
and
the victims of social injustice right here
in our homeland,

on this day before Martin Luther King Day,
and two days before Inauguration Day,
I, the proverbial kid in a room full of horseshit,
look for the pony,
and dig for the hope that was the intent
of those who signed the Declaration of Independence
will guide the hand that takes the oath of office,
may the long history of the oppressed be remembered
championed
and addressed.


1.  Playground of the Soul

where is this place I go,
rapturous in the night?
a jacaranda blooms,
I its corolla,
from where comes the scent
of the night blooming jasmine?
how does it enter my soul?
who spoke to the desert
told it to flower,
Reina de la noche?
how do I know the answer
to sand-filled footprints of the Sphinx
atop Killimanjaro,
Mona Lisa's smile?

every cell of my body vibrates
in exquisite delight,
I yawn with the sun
pages of memory
like falling snow,
my gown,
the night stars, my crown.




 
 
— Kailashana, Jan 18, 2009

Critiques

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W.C.Wampler

17 years 4 months ago

Three poems...

Kaila, Three good poems full of good ideas. I too have long since lost my pride for a country who's flag I used to wear on the back of my sleeveless denim jacket, while I only owned Harley Davidsons,(which I built anyway) But the more I study the problem, the more I believe it's a human thing. And I am one, and so, am a part of the problem.What Can I do about that? #3 is a nice exotic escape. Thanks wcw
Kailashana

Kailashana

17 years 4 months ago

Perhaps we’ve been using

Perhaps we've been using that *we're only human* excuse long enough, even the cosmos won't leave us with that one on our last breath. Humans are the only creatures of self-awareness that I know of, who have the ability to actually change things, to make the world a better place. Far too long we have enlisted the Gods above and our intrinsic scientific natures to create harm to ourselves, one another and our species in general, our blue orb and everything that is alive. Thousands of flora and fauna have perished or on the endangered list, some never to have been categorized and known, much less cherished. Are we evolving or dying out? What do we leave to our children's children? The American Indian lived for 7 generations hence, we just about wiped them out. ~A Sorry... my Sunday soapbox sermon. ;-) "All in all, it's just another brick in the wall." Pink Floyd There are no walls except for the ones we build. ~me~
Eduardo Cruz

Eduardo Cruz

17 years 4 months ago

Anna,

this is much better then our economy, three for the price of one and equal in value! Cosmic Dancer Moving! American and Proud Of It Fantastic! Playground of the Soul Truth! thanks, Eddie
Kailashana

Kailashana

17 years 4 months ago

Thanks Eddie, is the lovely

Thanks Eddie, is the lovely lady your wife or daughter? ~A "All in all, it's just another brick in the wall." Pink Floyd There are no walls except for the ones we build. ~me~
Eduardo Cruz

Eduardo Cruz

17 years 4 months ago

Anna,

it's my Mom at 20yrs of age. I put it up because of my write REVENGE. thanks, Eddie
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barbsdad2003

17 years 4 months ago

You have ...

an astonishing way with words. And content on a page. Makes me wish I were a poet. In admiration, Chuck PS: The only question I proffer: Did you intend the numbering of the entities to run 3-2-3 as posted?
Kailashana

Kailashana

17 years 4 months ago

Chuck, if it quakes like a

Chuck, if it quakes like a duck, it's probably a poet. ;-) Hug. ~A "All in all, it's just another brick in the wall." Pink Floyd There are no walls except for the ones we build. ~me~
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barbsdad2003

17 years 4 months ago

Wouldn't ...

it be nice if some pixie dust were sprinkled on Israel and (other) Arab/Muslim lands so as to put them all to sleep ... then to awake to the realization that theocracies (or anything quite close to them in principle) do not---cannot!---work. Hugs right back, Chuck
C

Conect11

17 years 4 months ago

2/3!!!

Poems three and one are equisite, one especially with moody suppleness. Two struck me as more of a manifesto than poetry. The sentiments are there, and proper, but it just didn't flow off the tongue as well for me... perhaps I like flowery language more, lol. As an aside, I have seen companies fail for reasons other than you describe. Of course, these were the smaller, mom and pop companies and not the conglomerates like you were most likely speaking of. Mark W. "Not since the Houston Asylum Fire of '54 have I seen so many flaming crazies." ~Dan Rather, SNL Fringe Candidates Debate
Kailashana

Kailashana

17 years 4 months ago

Mind…Body….Soul….

Mind...Body....Soul.... Sat-Chit-Ananda. ;-) ~A "All in all, it's just another brick in the wall." Pink Floyd There are no walls except for the ones we build. ~me~
Proprietress of Crimson Hearts

Proprietress o…

17 years 4 months ago

Kailashana,

Mistress of Words... you write with beauty, not with lead or ink. 1 and 3 are magical voids, 2 is the anchor to the present. thank you. respectfully, your Proprietress
Kailashana

Kailashana

17 years 4 months ago

No, thank YOU my

No, thank YOU my Proprietress. ~A "All in all, it's just another brick in the wall." Pink Floyd There are no walls except for the ones we build. ~me~
Y

youarehere

17 years 4 months ago

Rent garments

bare naked truth. 3 and 1...dance, woman, dance. 2: The voice is anger, but I feel deep grief and sorrow underneath...crocodile deathroll Nile goddess grief and sorrow. The grief and sorrow is beautiful, and is rain on a world of drought. More of that. (Hey, if I had a coffee house or a bistro or a deli or some such establishment of gatheirng and food, I'd name a sandwich that...The Crocodile Nile Goddess Death Roll...poetry on a roll...and serve it half-price with a spear on poetry open mic night.) -Michael
Kailashana

Kailashana

17 years 4 months ago

All I want is your icon,

All I want is your icon, Michael. You're a strange man...... I, however, know exactly how your brain works... now what does that say about me? LOL! Hug. ~Me, myself and I... "All in all, it's just another brick in the wall." Pink Floyd There are no walls except for the ones we build. ~me~
Y

youarehere

17 years 4 months ago

Icons of Grief and Strangeness

Talking to Grief by Denise Levertov Ah, Grief, I should not treat you like a homeless dog who comes to the back door for a crust, for a meatless bone. I should trust you. I should coax you into the house and give you your own corner, a worn mat to lie on, your own water dish. You think I don’t know you’ve been living under my porch. You long for your real place to be readied before winter comes. You need your name, your collar and tag. You need the right to warn off intruders, to consider my house your own and me your person and yourself my own dog. - ------------------------ *not-quite-P.S. Thought I'd avoid the obvious "People Are Strange" and opt for a lesser known Morrison pen... Strange Days by Jim Morrison Strange days have found us Strange days have tracked us down They're going to destroy Our casual joys We shall go on playing Or find a new town Yeah! Strange eyes fill strange rooms Voices will signal their tired end The hostess is grinning Her guests sleep from sinning Hear me talk of sin And you know this is it Yeah! Strange days have found us And through their strange hours We linger alone Bodies confused Memories misused As we run from the day To a strange night of stone
Y

youarehere

17 years 4 months ago

Oh, and,

regarding what your undertsanding of the way my brain works says about you...have you ever heard of a folie a deux...? : ) http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Folie_%C3%A0_deux When I first started doing the work I do now (mid-90's) I was working in an inpatient psychiatric unit...I worked with a blind man who was psychotic and "believed" he was the reincarnated Jesus Christ (I mean, who isn't, right?) but he was involved in a folie a deux with his mother, who was also psychotic...the content of his first psychotic break (read, aborted shamanic initiation)involved seeing too much pain and suffering in the world, so his mother helped him to lieterally poke his eyes out. Speaking of how brains work...in mine, I wanted to inquire whether he had used a broach, Oedipally speaking. It never seemed a useful question to ask, though, and the answer was perty darn clear from the getgo. And just to be clear, I'm not so much a brain guy, I'm a psyche and heart guy. : ) The brain is higly overated..check these out... psyche:https://www.utne.com/1995-01-01/JamesHillman.aspx heart:http://www.heartmath.org/ -Michael

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