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Pre-wedding Jitters

Fretting away the minutes
which turn into hours.
Every waking moment
turns into hopeful prayers that all will turn out perfectly.
It has to - we're due a break!

Good weather, so Jonathan's parents
can travel safely and be witnesses.
Likewise, so I can pick up Mother safely
as I promised her
that come hell or high water
she would see her daughter get married.

Can we get a date in time
before Mother goes on vacation?
What on earth will I wear
since we're not doing traditional dress?

We've been working on this for years
and now we're down to the last couple weeks
And we're nervous wrecks!
What if I forget my vows?
What if it snows?

Now I understand why brides
get sick and have headaches
I'm in their shoes
But it's worth it.

So I can only hope
and wait
and pray
Please let it all go smooth!
— infinite_dwarf, Jan 19, 2009

About the Author

Region, Country: North Carolina, USA, USA

Favorite Poets: E.A. Poe, Lewis Carroll, Charles Bukowski, Michael McClure, Lawrence Ferlenghetti.

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orgami

17 years 4 months ago

Happy day

Glad to hear this Lori and I considered marriage but then that was the end of that idea For us anyway its better just to stay arms length I wish you the best!!!
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Conect11

17 years 4 months ago

congratulations!

now the fun begins! Mark W. Galatians 5:22-23 "22 But the Holy Spirit produces this kind of fruit in our lives: love, joy, peace, patience, kindness, goodness, faithfulness, 23 gentleness, and self-control. Against these, there is no law!" My favorite verse(s) in the Bible
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poewriter58

17 years 4 months ago

Jess

In the end all will be well. How do you think Mom feels her baby is going to be married Mom
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Race_9togo

17 years 4 months ago

Good poem

I had no idea you and Jon were so close to your wedding! I wish for you both a life and marriage filled with joy and success. Respectfully, Jim "Laws and rules don't kill freedom: narrow-minded intolerance does" : Race
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Quillsvein1

17 years 4 months ago

Congratulations

Jess! Have faith! You're smart enough to have made the right pick, without a doubt--I admire your commitment and willingness. Now I understand why brides/ get sick and have headaches/I’m in their shoes/But it’s worth it." A statement of courage and the hallmark of the true poet: a willingness to take serious risks. God bless
J

JWwildcat2012

17 years 3 months ago

I congratulate you,Jess

I always believe that two people can have wonderful lives when they find each other,but keep in mind that in marriage,you have to deal with both sides of the coin,so to speak.Even a hilarious Curly of The Three Stooges said in a funny short film(to no one in particular,funny as it was)"So,tell me,Sir.....are you happy,or are you married?"Dont worry,though.Things work out even long after the vows are exchanged.Youll be fine. Keep writing,as I like what you write. Your friend,in peace, scott.

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