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Jan 19, 2009
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Pre-wedding Jitters
Fretting away the minutes
which turn into hours.
Every waking moment
turns into hopeful prayers that all will turn out perfectly.
It has to - we're due a break!
Good weather, so Jonathan's parents
can travel safely and be witnesses.
Likewise, so I can pick up Mother safely
as I promised her
that come hell or high water
she would see her daughter get married.
Can we get a date in time
before Mother goes on vacation?
What on earth will I wear
since we're not doing traditional dress?
We've been working on this for years
and now we're down to the last couple weeks
And we're nervous wrecks!
What if I forget my vows?
What if it snows?
Now I understand why brides
get sick and have headaches
I'm in their shoes
But it's worth it.
So I can only hope
and wait
and pray
Please let it all go smooth!
which turn into hours.
Every waking moment
turns into hopeful prayers that all will turn out perfectly.
It has to - we're due a break!
Good weather, so Jonathan's parents
can travel safely and be witnesses.
Likewise, so I can pick up Mother safely
as I promised her
that come hell or high water
she would see her daughter get married.
Can we get a date in time
before Mother goes on vacation?
What on earth will I wear
since we're not doing traditional dress?
We've been working on this for years
and now we're down to the last couple weeks
And we're nervous wrecks!
What if I forget my vows?
What if it snows?
Now I understand why brides
get sick and have headaches
I'm in their shoes
But it's worth it.
So I can only hope
and wait
and pray
Please let it all go smooth!
— infinite_dwarf, Jan 19, 2009
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orgami
17 years 4 months ago
Happy day
Conect11
17 years 4 months ago
congratulations!
poewriter58
17 years 4 months ago
Jess
Race_9togo
17 years 4 months ago
Good poem
Quillsvein1
17 years 4 months ago
Congratulations
JWwildcat2012
17 years 3 months ago
I congratulate you,Jess
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