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Too Pleased

"Happy as Can Be"
loose of consequence
elusive in bliss

a monument was erected
made of marble
clay, and ground glass

here's the key to the city
a pass for all access tours

Thank you for your service
we await your
"You're Very Welcome"
— IKnowNoBox, Jan 29, 2009

About the Author

Region, Country: East Coast, USA

Favorite Poets: Weird Elf, Shel Silverstein, The Poet Anonymous

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VAMPIREBLONDE

17 years 4 months ago

I like this one and the

I like this one and the style you have in most of your writings. Very real. Very descriptive.

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