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Jan 29, 2009
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Too Pleased
"Happy as Can Be"
loose of consequence
elusive in bliss
a monument was erected
made of marble
clay, and ground glass
here's the key to the city
a pass for all access tours
Thank you for your service
we await your
"You're Very Welcome"
loose of consequence
elusive in bliss
a monument was erected
made of marble
clay, and ground glass
here's the key to the city
a pass for all access tours
Thank you for your service
we await your
"You're Very Welcome"
— IKnowNoBox, Jan 29, 2009
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VAMPIREBLONDE
17 years 4 months ago
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