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Fate
Dead lie the leaves of forgotten dreams
On the floor of the forest there
Veins of red, purple and green
Show where once the lifeblood throbbed
Feeding the eyes of the leaves to see the world
As they danced and curled through Spring
Summer and Autumn! What have you done?
Smote them from their clasp to dive and tumble
Down to the earth, down,down,
Into the out-of-focus world below
Through streets, under cars, dust devilled
Into corners by front doors, or just down
To rot among last years weeds
A chorus of green and brown deeds.
Are the humans who rush in their cars
Like leaves? Do they stand fresh and proud
In the Spring? Do they colour and fade
In the winds and the rains, the sun and the shades,
Do they see the world in focus? Too few.
Clasp hard to what they might have? Some do.
Some want so hard, some never care,
But the end is the same thing everywhere.
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