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Fate

  "DEAD LIE THE LEAVES" ANN H.  1971.

 

Dead lie the leaves of forgotten dreams

On the floor of the forest there

Veins of red, purple and green

Show where once the lifeblood throbbed

Feeding the eyes of the leaves to see the world

 

As they danced and curled through Spring

Summer and Autumn! What have you done?

Smote them from their clasp to dive and tumble

Down to the earth, down,down,

 

Into the out-of-focus world below

Through streets, under cars, dust devilled

Into corners by front doors, or just down

To rot among last years weeds

A chorus of green and brown deeds.

 

Are the humans who rush in their cars

Like leaves? Do they stand fresh and proud 

In the Spring? Do they colour and fade

In the winds and the rains, the sun and the shades,

 

Do they see the world in focus? Too few.

Clasp hard to what they might have? Some do.

Some want so hard, some never care,

But the end is the same thing everywhere.


— Nordic cloud, Jan 30, 2009

About the Author

Region, Country: Oslo and Flatdal, Norway., NOR

Favorite Poets: Too daunting this.

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yenti

yenti

17 years 4 months ago

Something

there I said it. Quite an interesting read and brought out the autumn of our days, as we, so the leaves have a limit to our existance here, I would like to think that we left a better impression, than to rot in or on the ground, this is the diference twix body and spirit, if the spirit of the leaf is able to touch you, and then it lives for ever, Yours Ian.T

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