Crying Inside

My heart ,
It breaks
With a childs
Lonely cry,
Every day,
A little,
I die.
Reminded ,
Again,
Of the fiend
Inside...

— Calliope, Feb 09, 2009

About the Author

Region, Country: New York, USA

Critiques

orgami

17 years 4 months ago

inside the great hall of sorrow

the hurt that steals the night how many have I known the inner voice that calls till this one my foxhole sweetheart who sheds few tears grandaughter of one of the "Red Devils" canadian paratrooper she trains me but till then all the girls i knew cried some in day lots in nights for all forsaken damages done deeds crushing to the spirit this is a quick poem but it says so much and no one commented in ten hours I will

docmaverick

17 years 4 months ago

Sorry...

....ThAT YOU HAVE A "FIEND", INSIDE. TRULY YOURS. #{:@)}@=== DOCMAVERICK.

Calliope

17 years 4 months ago

Thanks O and Doc

I was having one of those horrid episodes of mine where i turn into myself and perhaps think too much on dark things.yes it is short,but telling.And I've visited the great hall of sorrow many times, it is a lonely place... Lacy, Where power corrupts,poetry cleanses.

docmaverick

17 years 4 months ago

How...

....genuinely "eloquent", of you. Now, you deserve a bouquette of roses; from my heart. !! ~~ .. + ~~~~~ docmaverick.

Mark

17 years 4 months ago

Hi Lacy

This poem is perfect and I just read it over and over. So well done. "the friend inside" superb! I sit here contemplating... Hope you feel better lately @--}---}-- If I could ever summarize the sum, I would retire and grow tangerines. Mark

Calliope

17 years 4 months ago

Thank you Mark

I'll take all the support I can for I am going through especially hard times these days, my life changing at a rapid pace. Glad you liked it. Thanks Doc I'll gladly receive your bouquet of roses with a misty smile and a hug for your heart. Lacy, Where power corrupts,poetry cleanses.

orgami

17 years 3 months ago

Rachmaninoff

been listening to Sergei His playing not copies obsessed with him lately Glen Miller Chet Baker (My funny valentine wow) Oscar Peterson Kim Novak I just got out of the psych I tried to overdose unsuccessfully I am glad I am alive I am glad we are here this great community I would have missed it so

Craig Norris

17 years 1 month ago

killing time softly

Calliope, have just caught up on the last twelve months or so of your work, what a journey, what a good journey. Great to see the growth in someones skill like that. This a strong piece that punches above it's weight I believe. Craig

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