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Feb 24, 2009
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Victim (for Kelsey)
Black night creeps forward
muffled screams extinguished
evil permeates the room
and then vanishes like the wind...
muffled screams extinguished
evil permeates the room
and then vanishes like the wind...
— infinite_dwarf, Feb 24, 2009
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