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Victim (for Kelsey)

Black night creeps forward
muffled screams extinguished
evil permeates the room
and then vanishes like the wind...
— infinite_dwarf, Feb 24, 2009

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Region, Country: North Carolina, USA, USA

Favorite Poets: E.A. Poe, Lewis Carroll, Charles Bukowski, Michael McClure, Lawrence Ferlenghetti.

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Ink Dragon

17 years 3 months ago

Jess,

this is spooky... Hope Kelsey is not feeling THAT bad... You sure did a great job on this one! Yours, ~Nina

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