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Mar 04, 2009
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Footprint in the Snow
Scrunch, scrunch, scrunch,
Goes the snow beneath our feet,
So many steps in the winter cold
With the frigid, icy flakes,
Fragile memorials of human weakness.
These glittering white fairies,
Imperially crystalline,
Dance with my wispy breath
And pirouette before my face
To find their way into my eyes,
Sacrificed as melting, frozen tears,
As others fall to the ground
To mourn their crushed brethren.
Their passing erodes my thawing heart,
Just as elapsed time melts our footprints away
Clearing the position of our parting.
This footprint of our separation
Becomes covered with years of new snow,
The evidence of us wiped clean
From the face our ever-changing emotions.
— Blue_Halcyon, Mar 04, 2009
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