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The way you listen, thank you.
You honour me as always
you fly with pixelled wings
you listen with the sweetest heart
and know what goodness brings
You share your depth, your history
you scale the walls of pain
you turn from hurtful attitudes
and sweep your path again
You love and honour those who care
you choose and then discern
those who're blessed with words from you
must trust and give and earn
and softly in the evening
your gentle clear reflections
are pasted to the tapping board
in simple flood perfection
You offer words that make me dream
that make me smile and weep
you paint such simple masterpiece
and move my soul rich crimson deep
Deep tones that I recognize
the muted colours play
like ribbons woven animation
transform nights black to day
So thanking you as always
and blessing all these gifts
I break sometimes without a light
but these words bring me lift
Critiques
Geezer
17 years 2 months ago
listening
Cloudthings
17 years 2 months ago
I can't help it. You bring me such joy & inspiration all of you
Geezer
17 years 2 months ago
by the way,
Cloudthings
17 years 2 months ago
love reading you, getting glimpses of your life on different lev
Nordic cloud
17 years 2 months ago
"O" YES!
Cloudthings
17 years 2 months ago
My lovely Neo forest nymph...
faerybeki
17 years 2 months ago
Great rhythm and rhyme,
Cloudthings
17 years 2 months ago
yes, O' is a pretty extraordinary muse indeed... & you
faerybeki
17 years 2 months ago
I read you and reread you x
Cloudthings
17 years 2 months ago
Oooh a gush my darling girl, chuckle, I am sure it will be beau
Bosscombat
17 years 2 months ago
awesome
Cloudthings
17 years 2 months ago
I suspect deep down, what I write has a song nestled in its hea
orgami
17 years 2 months ago
push through the shadow brilliance of the day
Cloudthings
17 years 2 months ago
inspired to look again through eyes, framed in guilded wonder
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