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The way you listen, thank you.

You honour me as always

you fly with pixelled wings

you listen with the sweetest heart

and know what goodness brings

 

You share your depth, your history

you scale the walls of pain

you turn from hurtful attitudes

and sweep your path again

 

You love and honour those who care

you choose and then discern

those who're blessed with words from you

must trust and give and earn

 

and softly in the evening

your gentle clear reflections

are pasted to the tapping board

in simple flood perfection

 

You offer words that make me dream

that make me smile and weep

you paint such simple masterpiece

and move my soul rich crimson deep

 

Deep tones that I recognize

the muted colours play

like ribbons woven animation

transform nights black to day

 

So thanking you as always

and blessing all these gifts

I break sometimes without a light

but these words bring me lift



— Cloudthings, Apr 02, 2009

About the Author

Region, Country: Australia, regional Victoria, AUS

Favorite Poets: So many... Rumi, Spike Milligan, Keats. Many of the Neopoet clan, past & present. A myriad of song writers, Dylan, Jackson Browne, Lior, & I must add the poetic influence of painters, sculptors & creators across the world... Life really, especially the sky.

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Geezer

Geezer

17 years 2 months ago

listening

thank you, for sharing this with all of us. 'O' is one of my favorites here. i'm sure he doesn't mind sharing, but giving credit where due is always appreciated. [so i'm convinced] he deserves any and all the recognition he gets. happiness is a matter of perspective. gee.
Cloudthings

Cloudthings

17 years 2 months ago

I can't help it. You bring me such joy & inspiration all of you

Sometimes (perhaps when he is bored O' just sends me wordy spills about "life, the universe & everything", they are such a delight, they make me "spill" back... This is one of the spills from last night (took me ages to get around to responding, sorry O')... When I read it back I thought of all of you, I am so spoiled to have such lovely connections with people here, & with a different flavour, I feel like this about you all, all those lovely folk who make an effort so generously to make contact. We are so lucky, all of us, I think... I love O's writing when they are just for me I am completely inspired to just spill away in response & LOVE what he pulls from my pen lit by what has spilled from his... We all feed each other in such wonderful potent ways... I think I shall have to begin doing one for each of you though, you all have such brilliant & unique qualities... So far, Ann & Orgami... more to come I think, I have already written some in honour of a few, but we will see... I can't help it. You bring me such joy & inspiration all of you. With loads of gratitude Anni "Out beyond the ideas of wrongdoing and rightdoing, there is a field. I will meet you there. When the soul lies down in that grass, the world is too full to talk about ideas, language, and even the phrase, "each other" doesn't make any sense."
Geezer

Geezer

17 years 2 months ago

by the way,

you wrote a great piece, and it gives me pleasure to see you write, i know that you take much time that might be otherwise allotted to other tasks, but miss you when those tasks take you away. wish that you had as much time as you wanted to write for us. i'm sure that i speak for all here in this, our beautiful place. play lotteries,[do they have them there?] maybe we will get lucky and you will win! happines is a matter of perspective. gee.
Cloudthings

Cloudthings

17 years 2 months ago

love reading you, getting glimpses of your life on different lev

That's just it, I am so lucky, I do so much in this world, very little of it brings much money, but I am incredibly rich because I get to do stuff that makes other people happy... but here, it's you guys that make ME happy.... I love it so much, love reading you, getting glimpses of your life on all different levels, love seeing your skills & strengths develop, love the courage I see when you expose your weakness in poem & face it so bravely... it's the best xxx Anni "Out beyond the ideas of wrongdoing and rightdoing, there is a field. I will meet you there. When the soul lies down in that grass, the world is too full to talk about ideas, language, and even the phrase, "each other" doesn't make any sense."
Nordic cloud

Nordic cloud

17 years 2 months ago

"O" YES!

I do so agree with you, I too enjoy the out-spillings of his pen and join with you to thank him for his words, those snatched around him like the fruits from a tree enriching our minds, their thoughts and wonderings while on the wings of his make-believe planes he sees into the heart of things. Beautiful poem Anni. Your friend Ann
Cloudthings

Cloudthings

17 years 2 months ago

My lovely Neo forest nymph...

My darling Ann, well everybody knows now that you have an incredible skill that I happen to also completely adore, you work differently from O', yet you put out so richly into this world dear one... You are precious, as precious can be, I could eat you with all that creative adornment you express.... My lovely Neo forest nymph... Love ya to bits Anni "Out beyond the ideas of wrongdoing and rightdoing, there is a field. I will meet you there. When the soul lies down in that grass, the world is too full to talk about ideas, language, and even the phrase, "each other" doesn't make any sense."
faerybeki

faerybeki

17 years 2 months ago

Great rhythm and rhyme,

Great rhythm and rhyme, wonderful sentiment and beautifully expressed, as ever! and a worthy muse to boot! :) You know I love your work Anni. Apologies for brevity of comment. much love b xx
Cloudthings

Cloudthings

17 years 2 months ago

yes, O' is a pretty extraordinary muse indeed... & you

Totally understand the brevity dearest Beki angel... am about to scoot to get my boy an x-ray, he fell off his bike while at his das & his arm is aching 5 days later... Thanks for the time though, I know what it takes, it's hard to squeeze in Have missed you a bit... I have to share you more now you are ever more popular... loving what you are doing. You well know you are right up there with my gorgeous bunch of muses, aren't we so lucky... & yes, O' is a pretty extraordinary muse indeed.. I could never take it for granted... so wish I could just write all day! Loads of love girl xxx Anni "Out beyond the ideas of wrongdoing and rightdoing, there is a field. I will meet you there. When the soul lies down in that grass, the world is too full to talk about ideas, language, and even the phrase, "each other" doesn't make any sense."
faerybeki

faerybeki

17 years 2 months ago

I read you and reread you x

Hey Anni, do hope your boy ok? they will get into scrapes won't they? however we might think we'd like to wrap them in cotton wool, it's right for them to explore and experience the world in all it's rawness. Have missed you a bit too :) seems we both have to share and deal with the glare (you more than I perhaps) but I read you and I reread you and it always brings me such joy. I'm afarid I must confess to extreme gushing (please see my new post 'Exquisite Soulful Wonderings') you are so great at acknowledging others I wanted to acknowledge you hon, for bringing such light and so much sweet water... do hope you don't mind :) much love b xxx
Cloudthings

Cloudthings

17 years 2 months ago

Oooh a gush my darling girl, chuckle, I am sure it will be beau

Hey my friend, G is fine, he came off his bike at his dads, still hurting 5 days later, wasn't a greenstick fracture which I was concerned about, & yes I agree, it's our challenge to let them take the risks Oooh a gush my darling girl, chuckle, I am sure it will be beautiful whatever it is... Gotta go scoot & look xxx Anni "Out beyond the ideas of wrongdoing and rightdoing, there is a field. I will meet you there. When the soul lies down in that grass, the world is too full to talk about ideas, language, and even the phrase, "each other" doesn't make any sense."
B

Bosscombat

17 years 2 months ago

awesome

Hey! I think this is a great piece of penmanship! Has great musicality and a good feel. I don't know much about poetry because im only new (started last month) but I know what I like. You have my vote. Bosscombat
Cloudthings

Cloudthings

17 years 2 months ago

I suspect deep down, what I write has a song nestled in its hea

Hey Boss, thanks so much... I'm pretty new here too, though very addicted... & I don't know much about poetry either... been writing on my own most of my life never thought I'd be sharing it with anyone except through songs occassionally (hey well picked by the way, I'm impressed... I suspect somewhere deep down, most of what I write has a song nestled within its heart). I was really impressed reading your work, it has a fantastic storyline quality to it, I have not seen often, like a cross between poem & story (duh, guess that last was superfluous!)... You weave stories really well, I look forward to more. Cheers Anni "Out beyond the ideas of wrongdoing and rightdoing, there is a field. I will meet you there. When the soul lies down in that grass, the world is too full to talk about ideas, language, and even the phrase, "each other" doesn't make any sense."
O

orgami

17 years 2 months ago

push through the shadow brilliance of the day

than ks for the tribute poem "in lieu of flowers please donate to Neopoet" yes Anni and I write creative words finding a place to pause and rest on the common tree in forest or park visual perceptions sharp connects from mind to eye and senses keen she speaks and writes so lyrically its pure delight to read her text did our shopping did my chores now was listening to Bach played by some genius youngster on a Harpischord from U Tube did have Mozart in the F:drive gotta go read some thank you very tired
Cloudthings

Cloudthings

17 years 2 months ago

inspired to look again through eyes, framed in guilded wonder

Hi you, glad you dropped in on your poem!!! See guys, how he just makes the most simple mundane things pull into focus like a beautifully framed photograph in sepia... inspiring one to look again at something common through eyes framed in guilded wonder... Ahhh I love it. Gotta race myself... & am tired also, but filled with gratitude, thanks for being so inspiring O'... it's this Neo habit I reckon.. hard to resist for me. Ta for dropping in O' & hope you don't mind sharing, but see how we all agree on your brilliance... lucky us to have you. Take care friend, get more sleep! xx Anni "Out beyond the ideas of wrongdoing and rightdoing, there is a field. I will meet you there. When the soul lies down in that grass, the world is too full to talk about ideas, language, and even the phrase, "each other" doesn't make any sense."

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