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Apr 06, 2009
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Point I draw on this fine day.
Ten clicks out now stop drop and stay.
Listen.
The man with the prick is dead.
One shot straight through his head.
His name Jeff. so strong and tall
to carry the prick on his back.
I watched him walk through rain
and mud
To trenches of sludge coverd by green.
Into a fire fight without a thought
Jeff and his prick fifty.
Call for a drop or we are all dead.
where the hell is the prick.
He stood tall and made his way
The drop was on most walked
away.
Ten clicks out now stop drop and stay.
Listen.
The man with the prick is dead.
One shot straight through his head.
His name Jeff. so strong and tall
to carry the prick on his back.
I watched him walk through rain
and mud
To trenches of sludge coverd by green.
Into a fire fight without a thought
Jeff and his prick fifty.
Call for a drop or we are all dead.
where the hell is the prick.
He stood tall and made his way
The drop was on most walked
away.
— sakkkkkkkkkkkkkkk, Apr 06, 2009
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Critiques
Morgana Tragic…
17 years 2 months ago
Awesome again Steven...
sakkkkkkkkkkkkkkk
17 years 2 months ago
A POET MY FRIEND WILL NEVER END JUST START LIFE AGIAN
Geezer
17 years 2 months ago
agree with katie
sakkkkkkkkkkkkkkk
17 years 2 months ago
PERCEPTION FRIEND
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