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Apr 18, 2009
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Eyes dark yellow,in pale moonlight,
Powerful form,keen eyesight.
Long brown hair, it flows with a breeze.
He stands six foot two on his knees.
A shadow moves,it slides by.
they don't know,unseeing eyes.
Watching closely,from quite near,
He hears sounds foreign to his ear.
Fingers feeling clothes on a line,
He smells faint scents, ahhh... so divine!
Longing for more close contact,
He knows that he must not act.
A thinking soul, emotions many.
He can't figure them out,or can he?
Curious about his next of kin,
You know the ones,pink hairless skins!
Powerful form,keen eyesight.
Long brown hair, it flows with a breeze.
He stands six foot two on his knees.
A shadow moves,it slides by.
they don't know,unseeing eyes.
Watching closely,from quite near,
He hears sounds foreign to his ear.
Fingers feeling clothes on a line,
He smells faint scents, ahhh... so divine!
Longing for more close contact,
He knows that he must not act.
A thinking soul, emotions many.
He can't figure them out,or can he?
Curious about his next of kin,
You know the ones,pink hairless skins!
— Geezer, Apr 18, 2009
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Knuckles
17 years 1 month ago
Another great write
Rett
17 years 1 month ago
Hey Gee, I love it!
Seren
17 years 1 month ago
Gee Ive had a crappy couple
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