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Conect11
Apr 21, 2009 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Church Epigram

Bob Schoenbeck invited his brotherto join us in church one Sunday.“Nah, church is filled with nothing but hypocrites!”His brother told him.“True,” Bob said;“but there’s always room for one more…”
— Conect11, Apr 21, 2009
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infinite_dwarf

infinite_dwarf

17 years 1 month ago

Aww Mark....

Usually your poetry floors me. Other than a small chuckle at the end, I just kind of sat there and blinked at the screen. Maybe it would do good with a bit of an expansion? Sorry buddy. ~Jess K. ---------------------------------------------------- - "I wound her up, an' I shifted down, an' I offered this prayer to my Lord: Said, God, get me back home to Houston alive, an' I won't drive a truck anymore..." - Steve Earle

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