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Apr 30, 2009
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Off Center
If we can remove ourselves
from the center...
our understanding of Life
can begin...
plant a seed for tomorrow.
from the center...
our understanding of Life
can begin...
plant a seed for tomorrow.
— themoonman, Apr 30, 2009
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Tonya
17 years 1 month ago
Now there
themoonman
17 years 1 month ago
Tonya...
Rett
17 years 1 month ago
Dead centered my friend
themoonman
17 years 1 month ago
Yes...
infinite_dwarf
17 years 1 month ago
Richard
themoonman
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Jess...
isitme
17 years 1 month ago
I agree
themoonman
17 years 1 month ago
isitme...
faerybeki
17 years 1 month ago
Richard, love the simplicity
themoonman
17 years 1 month ago
Ya know...
themoonman
17 years 1 month ago
D.D.
themoonman
17 years 1 month ago
Hi Janice...
Wafi
17 years 1 month ago
Wow!!!
themoonman
17 years 1 month ago
Wafi...
R.M.Shanmugam
17 years 1 month ago
a matured thought so deep in
themoonman
17 years ago
Shan...
Proprietress o…
17 years ago
Mr.Moonman.
themoonman
17 years ago
Kata...
Bonitaj
17 years ago
OFF CENTRE
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