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A ROLL TO SPIN

A ROLL TO SPIN

A million ways
A million dream

We spin the wheel
For luck to give back
A child needs
 
What we need  what is a must
Is missing
From that wheel of luck

The way a child feels
When they run in
The greenest  hills

In their laughter
The ways that they play
Innocent words of  friendship
Always end with  OK

This is what we spin for every day
The innocent ,simplicity   
Without problem made  

So the wheel will spin
One more time
Another roll in the gamble
Of life

— press, May 07, 2009

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yenti

yenti

17 years 1 month ago

The infinite Gamble

of Life its self, I liked this one and it was really a great piece of thinking there, there is still a tiny need to perfect your words but from your first pieses to this one there is a great change and great wauy of writing blossoming here, Yours Ian.T

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