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May 10, 2009
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Mother of my Heart, written by my neice Rayanna!! for me on Mother's day! Enjoy!!
Mother of my heart The mother of my heart, not blood,
who helped me become the soul I own. and held me till I might turn to lovenever to leave me to be alone. Whose unmoved faith my heart did move,patiently did she openly prove. For all that you have given me,
I can return but love For you,
bound up the wounds I did not see
giving me hopes and passions new.
Ray
Written for me by my neice Rayanna! Thank you Ray! I am just convinced you all will just love to read it!!!!
who helped me become the soul I own. and held me till I might turn to lovenever to leave me to be alone. Whose unmoved faith my heart did move,patiently did she openly prove. For all that you have given me,
I can return but love For you,
bound up the wounds I did not see
giving me hopes and passions new.
Written for me by my neice Rayanna! Thank you Ray! I am just convinced you all will just love to read it!!!!
— DawningDaytripper, May 10, 2009
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deelilah
17 years 1 month ago
This is special
themoonman
17 years 1 month ago
Hi Julie...
Geezer
17 years 1 month ago
Ray of sunshine for D.D.
Mark
17 years ago
psst
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