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Mother of my Heart, written by my neice Rayanna!! for me on Mother's day! Enjoy!!

Mother of my heart The mother of my heart, not blood,
who helped me become the soul I own.  and held me till I might turn to lovenever to leave me to be alone. Whose unmoved faith my heart did move,patiently did she openly prove. For all that you have given me,
I can return but love For you,
bound up the wounds I did not see
giving me hopes and passions new.             Image removed.Ray

Written for me by my neice Rayanna! Thank you Ray! I am just convinced you all will just love to read it!!!!
— DawningDaytripper, May 10, 2009

About the Author

Region, Country: Robe valley, WA, USA

Favorite Poets: All of them, for differant reasons. Neopoet poets have influenced me the most over the last 2 plus years. Great teachers. Edgar Allen Poe, Dickens, way to many to list...

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deelilah

deelilah

17 years 1 month ago

This is special

This was a very special Mother's Day present, wasn't it? It is an excellent poem, as well. 'The mother of my heart, not blood, who helped me become the soul I own.' I love this line above. I will give her 5 for that line and for writing it for you. How old is this person? The thinking is very mature. Also, is she related to you, or to your husband? You mentioned, he is Native; the poem sounds Native to me. Come to think of it, I really don't know if you are, or not Native. I can only guess from your poetry and comments. You mention the 'Rez' in comments on 'Wonder Dog', so now I wonder. By the way, 'My Silent Brave' was a blood boiler. I couldn't put it down, though I was blushing (and jealous). I have read quite a bit of Native American literature, including fiction, by both white and Native authors, all of whom gave the Natives the respect they deserve, and the poem sounded very authentic, though to more sensual extremes. I am in the middle of a novel for youth that includes two Native Americans kids among six (3 white, 2 Indian, 1 black) from the area up there by Marysville. I would love to consult with you sometime to make sure I keep it authentic. Always, Deelilah
themoonman

themoonman

17 years 1 month ago

Hi Julie...

You must be very proud... Ray is showing quite an artistic flare... and of course, her love for you... thanks for sharing this with us... must've been a huge surprise on Mother's Day! Richard
Geezer

Geezer

17 years 1 month ago

Ray of sunshine for D.D.

Your niece must truly be a ray of sunshine in your life. She sounds like a very mature girl who recognizes that you care very much for and about her. Really like hearing that tune as there are many young people that have little respect for adults and the things that they try to teach and do for them. Nice! Gee.
Mark

Mark

17 years ago

psst

that was easy Mark "some things change, some things don't"

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