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May 20, 2009
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MANY YEARS IN THE NEW GAME
Two hundred years
In the past this begun
A birth
United in states
All men will become
This Single word
a song
Of freedom
Shared
Made by every
Ethnicity of Countries
In these people
Ethical out bye
Unwanted cares
They are dirty
Compared to the blue bloods
The lords of property
And the money
That knows no love
Some like trash
Put on a boat
Some made into slave
Their worth is money
As they are sole to a buyer hook
As they all came
To this united but still not a state
Most all the colored’s
Are still in chains
But the fair skin
Ire’s , polish ,, German
But still white
Walk free off that boat
Starting their
New life
In this new place
A boat with the coloreds
The dream of freedom
They will chase
Some go to war
But only as a slave
And nothing more
Shine that shoe boy
This is going to be a long one
The best part is next
How the Germans and the polish
Are slaves without chains
IT IS NOT FINISH YET I WILL BE FAIR TO ALL
In the past this begun
A birth
United in states
All men will become
This Single word
a song
Of freedom
Shared
Made by every
Ethnicity of Countries
In these people
Ethical out bye
Unwanted cares
They are dirty
Compared to the blue bloods
The lords of property
And the money
That knows no love
Some like trash
Put on a boat
Some made into slave
Their worth is money
As they are sole to a buyer hook
As they all came
To this united but still not a state
Most all the colored’s
Are still in chains
But the fair skin
Ire’s , polish ,, German
But still white
Walk free off that boat
Starting their
New life
In this new place
A boat with the coloreds
The dream of freedom
They will chase
Some go to war
But only as a slave
And nothing more
Shine that shoe boy
This is going to be a long one
The best part is next
How the Germans and the polish
Are slaves without chains
IT IS NOT FINISH YET I WILL BE FAIR TO ALL
— press, May 20, 2009
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Critiques
Craig Norris
17 years ago
Love this theme
Rett
17 years ago
Press, I think it is very ambitious and good
press
17 years ago
Dad
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