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Dreamwalker Pt. I: The Paradox

Full silver moon atop the mesa bright
Illuminating spiritual dance
Upon an ambered lavender delight
The silver wolf and golden eagle prance.

The goddess of the night, she brings her song
Arising from the mists to guide my soul
Extending hands, she knows for what I long
I grab her hand, she shakes her head, says no.

The paradox defined her eyes impart
Seductive temptress tells me what to do
She taunts my mind, provoking to my heart
The moonlit desert waits, she gives a clue.

She leads me to a crevice by a pine
Enclosed by time and cliffs, my destined mine.

 
— mwrigas, May 22, 2009

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Morgana Tragic…

17 years ago

Like it I like it

This was very beautiful, stunning imagery and a romantic feel to it (though I'm not a romantic myself hehehe) I just love the night time, whole blazon moon image through out. It's delightfully haunting. You're fitting in very well here at Neo. It's great to see. Hope you keep enjoying it new buddy!!!!!! Peace n Love Katie

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