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Splitting Menagerie

When you're faking a smile for the
Orange dusted dusk, the pink tinged ribbons
Twining themselves around the broken flashbacks
In the breaking mirrored skies...
Splitting menagerie masks, all of the shame
Hiding upon the furious horizon.
You haven't talked to me in a while...
But I know you're lying when you say
You're OK. The words are too feeble to be real,
And all I can do is watch you fade
Into the burgundy skyline...

Burgundy like the blood seeping
When you cut your wrists today.  
Oh, your ravaged estranged heart
Is almost more than I can take,  
Your pain dismal against the shaded firmament.
I'd run a thousand miles to make it go away...
I'd run but could you tell me how far?
 

When the bedraggled limpness in your beautiful face
Falls like mangle winged butterflies in the
Orange beams of dawn. Your eyes once
Endowed with the simplicity of blissfulness;
They now darken to an ominous dusk and
I can't pull you out at all, haunted by the
Grieving scars, the kaleidescope faces of
The palest moon. Shame is like the
Night enshrouded flowers when you haven't
Laughed in so long. You tried to laugh tonight.
I know it was fake. It was too feeble to be real
And all I can do is watch you bleed every
Shade of demonic anger...

Streaking recklessly down the melting skies...
Your resplendent dreams, crestfallen in pieces
Every time you hang your head and cry,
Your tears beneath the meandering moon
From the dark wondrous eyes, the magic I once knew.
I'd hold you until all the hurt is gone,
I'd make it better only if you didn't turn away.  

When you're surrounded by just the night,
It's deepened grief beyond the silvery stars
Scathing surreality, eclipsing the occulted moon...
Have you become just like the howling ghost
After all of this time...don't you know that it's
No way to go, taking a knife to your wrist...
If I could pull you from the darkest corner,
Take your hand and make every creeping
Pain go away...you know I would.
You scraped another cut into your skin.
I know you did it today. It's still trickling blood
And all I can do is let you stain your own hands.

I would walk away but it's too hard letting you go,
These broken pieces like the drawn gypsy eyes
In the gleaming twilight skies, merging colors
Dancing intricately with shadows on the floor
And your smile is still too feeble to be real.  
I'd pick up the scattered pieces and put them
Back together, I'd make it go away but it's all
I can do just to be here for you .

 

 

— Morgana Tragic Proprietress, May 23, 2009

About This Poem

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Region, Country: Somewhere Past Nevermore, CAN

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CN

Craig Norris

17 years ago

Wow

slipping into the depths of pain caught within the onslaught. Nice one. Craig
Morgana Tragic Proprietress

Morgana Tragic…

17 years ago

Hey craig, As always,

Hey craig, As always, thanks. I always appreciate your comments. Peace N Love Katie
CN

Craig Norris

17 years ago

something extra

you know when you cook a dish, or taste a dish and there's heaps and heaps of flavours and they all come together and become hard to define, get lost within the complexity, and sometimes you have something that a good chef has prepared, something exquisite, it can amaze you with its simplicity, two or three flavours subtly entwined, thats the art, not overdoing things. Craig
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mwrigas

17 years ago

dang! this is really good.

dang! this is really good. i can feel the frustration, fear and love in this poem and the imagery is just awesome, powerful and makes the reader feel what the author feels. the rhythm is perfect and smooth. very well done and i always enjoy reading your work. Mike.
Morgana Tragic Proprietress

Morgana Tragic…

17 years ago

Hey mwrigas,

Thanks so much for commenting and reading. Of course, you know the story behind this one. Your friendship has been extremely meaningful and I appreciate it very much. Peace N Love Katie
Geezer

Geezer

17 years ago

Splitting...

I don't know what it is all about, but don't need to either. You have shown me the agony you feel for this person, and that I can truly identify with. I wish happiness and flowers for you both. .Gee.
Morgana Tragic Proprietress

Morgana Tragic…

17 years ago

Hey Geez

Thanks so much, as always. This was written for someone who's been having some problems lately...but he seems to be ok now, thank goodness. As always, thanks. *A flower for you* Peace n Love Katie
mand

mand

17 years ago

Extreme talent

Hi Katie Your poems are very deep and descriptive. Once I started reading this poem I couldn't stop. The pain that you suffer is very deep and I suspect you find some relief when you write. You are extremely tallented. Keep up the good work.
Morgana Tragic Proprietress

Morgana Tragic…

17 years ago

Hey Mand

Thanks so much. Let me just say that if I didn't write I wouldn't be sane. It is my release, as many here can relate. Thanks, Peace n love Katie