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Jun 06, 2009
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perennial dreams
perennial dreams
the sun sets
in your eyes' ravine
of laden stone
where love used
to river through
the lusty green
and painting brown
now tepidly
resting to suit
the gustier mood
caught in time's
timeless tide
of jaded memories
drowning in
the streams
of our perennial
dreams
the sun sets
in your eyes' ravine
of laden stone
where love used
to river through
the lusty green
and painting brown
now tepidly
resting to suit
the gustier mood
caught in time's
timeless tide
of jaded memories
drowning in
the streams
of our perennial
dreams
— nokros, Jun 06, 2009
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Ink Dragon
17 years ago
Nokros,
Ink Dragon
17 years ago
Nokros,
nokros
17 years ago
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