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Jun 11, 2009
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A Sad State of Affairs
Believe you, me
I'm quite aware,
of what some consider
sad states of affairs.
Having tobacco when one's out of papers
a plethora of papers without tobacco,
or having both...but possessing no lighter!
Those are merely ironic circumstances,
but, I know a sad state of affairs
when I'm forced to live one,
and their stark realities can cause one to die, inside.
I have met women by sharing common interests,
similar values, and like circumstances,
but, really to no avail.
For something always impedes our progress
as a potential couple; stars out of alignment,
an age difference, religious disagreement, or
merely a difference in preferences;
and those, are true, sad states of affairs !
To survive all of these things, the stars must be completely aligned up.....
or, you must hold her "hostage"!!!
I'm quite aware,
of what some consider
sad states of affairs.
Having tobacco when one's out of papers
a plethora of papers without tobacco,
or having both...but possessing no lighter!
Those are merely ironic circumstances,
but, I know a sad state of affairs
when I'm forced to live one,
and their stark realities can cause one to die, inside.
I have met women by sharing common interests,
similar values, and like circumstances,
but, really to no avail.
For something always impedes our progress
as a potential couple; stars out of alignment,
an age difference, religious disagreement, or
merely a difference in preferences;
and those, are true, sad states of affairs !
To survive all of these things, the stars must be completely aligned up.....
or, you must hold her "hostage"!!!
— docmaverick, Jun 11, 2009
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Geezer
17 years ago
A sad state of affairs
docmaverick
17 years ago
Hey, Gee....
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