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Flight of feathered courage and good heart (For our Faery woman - The 2nd of several "Odes)

Open a door, she awaits in generous anticipation
Enjoyment in another’s inclusion.
Unadorned by stale pretension
She is vulnerable
And courageous to be so exposed
We laugh with her and love her for it.

She spreads Faery dust for all of us who come to her
And beckons us to fly her starlit ways
Adventurous, she is the “Pan” of Wendy’s sensibilities
Drawing us to joyous states of freedom
Fantasy her forte
Suspended here beneath her spell of gentle wonder
Patient at her feet for stories sparkling and fresh
She gathers us like playground company to frolic
And we do

She is sweet friendliness
No venom spat from these lips
Just ever upward effort to be more
She ascends with playful mirth to cloud crowned pleasure
Dangles beach sand speckled, sockless feet towards the distant earth
Pants rolled up to knees
(She is the one so ever ready to be dancing and included,
Not for her, the sidelines
See her scramble to her feet, ever ready for the challenge – and the share)
A pensive moment gathered to her
As she contemplates the view
Another insight
Another wisdom budding - I can feel it blossoming
So willing to move forward
As a constant inspiration to her little one
(and anyone, she tosses sweetness skyward, sprinkling any lucky passers by with serendipitous intention)
Her own Faery child
Her magic wonderment embodied
She will bless this one with all the dreams she might have missed or shunned before
And place offerings of daily goodness
Knowing that in giving is the gift
Thus she is blessed, like all of us who know.

May your wings be ever free
And feathered with the courage and the goodness with which your heart abounds
— Cloudthings, Jun 12, 2009

About the Author

Region, Country: Australia, regional Victoria, AUS

Favorite Poets: So many... Rumi, Spike Milligan, Keats. Many of the Neopoet clan, past & present. A myriad of song writers, Dylan, Jackson Browne, Lior, & I must add the poetic influence of painters, sculptors & creators across the world... Life really, especially the sky.

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Ink Dragon

17 years ago

Anni,

I wholeheartedly wish the very same for Beki, that little fairy who dances through whirlwinds of words to Neverland and beyond. Beki, you have a wonderful friend in Anni, and it is my firm belief that everybody who would dare to try and clip your wings would have to get past her first. Love to you both, ~Nina
Cloudthings

Cloudthings

16 years 12 months ago

Chuckling, oooh yes, if I could stand as guardian dragonfly prot

Chuckling, oooh yes, if I could stand as guardian dragonfly protector I would, even so, we all must learn our lessons, but I do feel Beki is well due a wonderful time from now on... May no person give her a hard time indeed!~ Anni ~~~ "I feel no need for any other faith than my faith in the kindness of human beings. I am so absorbed in the wonder of earth and the life upon it that I cannot think of heaven and angels." Pearl S. Buck:
faerybeki

faerybeki

17 years ago

Anni, you wonderous thing

Anni, you wonderous thing you! :) You bring me early morning tears and smiles a plenty with this. I don't quite know what to say to thank you dear one, you write me how I wish to be and this connection with you helps me get there!! You enable me to soar so much more often than I used to, your support and encouragement are so very appreciated and add feathers of strength to these wings of mine :) It's true I am always the first on the dance floor (well, someone has to be eh?) and have been known to roll up my trousers before even arriving at the beach! lol Oh Anni it is marvelous to be seen and to be known by you, you woman for whom flight is so important are teaching me new techniques of aero-acrobatics each day, I glow with the deep knowledge of our sisterhood and thank the universe daily for the finding of this site, and the inclusion of you in my life :) I'm taking my Omi to Glastonbury today with a couple of friends so I must go, although I'd so love to linger, I'm driving so had better get on, what a gift you bring me Anni at the start of this day, that can now be nothing less than amazing, just as you are! Dear sister in hope and in wishing, in love and integrity, in wisdom and learning, I do love you so :) Thank you Anni for this honour and for well, just being you, I'm am ever so grateful for you hon. Hooray!!! much love and squeezes of thanks, will revisit later!! Love you b xxxx Ps Thanks Nina :) love you too, dear poetess x
Cloudthings

Cloudthings

16 years 12 months ago

so glad it pleases you Bek, & that I can add some support to the

Dearest Beki, it is completely my pleasure, you did inspire this after all my sweet. Ah Glastonbury, one day I'll get there! I'm so glad it pleases you Bek, & that I can add some support to the lovely way you choose to direct your life (though I would just like to nag you to give up smoking heh!). I do know these things, I do think we are in a way kindred (like Anushka too), we are divers into living, despite it biting us some times. I am known a little for these things too, which is why I think we'd have so much fun together, & even better I love us for never feeling that awful degrading sense of competition, we can both fling ourselves on the dance floor to encourage others to get up (I know, it's what I do as well) & embrace life with a sister beside us. You are a wondrous being dear Bek, I am so glad you were born girl!~ Anni ~~~ "I feel no need for any other faith than my faith in the kindness of human beings. I am so absorbed in the wonder of earth and the life upon it that I cannot think of heaven and angels." Pearl S. Buck:
faerybeki

faerybeki

17 years ago

Anni, just had to pop in

Anni, just had to pop in again before logging off! thank you, thank you, thank you for seeing all this in me and there by allowing me to glimpse it a bit myself :) you're a marvelous creature, I feel honoured to know and be known by you dear woman :) Hooray! indeed hooray! for faery/cloud alliance :) much love b xx Ps typo feary -> faery :) more love b xx
Cloudthings

Cloudthings

16 years 12 months ago

I'll be holding that mirror any time you forget how beautiful yo

Ta for typo check magic dust xxx & I believe that's what loving is in large, that lovely generosity & safe mirroring of another. Holding that mirror up so you can see how wonderful you really are through the eyes of someone who is happy to reflect it generously. You take a good long look & I'll be holding that mirror any time you forget how beautiful you are my friend, I wont forget. xxx~ Anni ~~~ "I feel no need for any other faith than my faith in the kindness of human beings. I am so absorbed in the wonder of earth and the life upon it that I cannot think of heaven and angels." Pearl S. Buck:
faerybeki

faerybeki

17 years ago

Ok so I’m back for one

Ok so I'm back for one last read before departing for holiday, how am I to manage without Neo for a whole TWO weeks? :) I shall miss you dear one, hope you're having another fab weekend with the otters hon, will look forward to catching up with you, and no doubt tons more of your amazing poems, upon my return, much love, as always , b xxx
Cloudthings

Cloudthings

16 years 12 months ago

Great, a holiday, wonderful, we will miss you,

Great, a holiday, wonderful, I will miss you, but will be having to have less Neo time for a while... fixed the typo, at least I got Faery rith in ONE place... what WAS I thinking??? Much love girl xxx~ Anni ~~~ "I feel no need for any other faith than my faith in the kindness of human beings. I am so absorbed in the wonder of earth and the life upon it that I cannot think of heaven and angels." Pearl S. Buck:
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orgami

17 years ago

Yes I agree

She has the greatest ability to inspire without the conspire (I admit to being a junkyard dog kicking up dirt when my own Ire is up growling when I can ..but no not Beki!!) I have many good comments from her sometimes sometimes its not just about stars for me now I was confrontational my life stirred too to react when life was dull at home My mother loved her sparks loved the flames she was soothing too though not all bad at all its coming to me now sometimes its nice to just have a calm "Hey there fellow soul How are you Have a happy day" I get critiques too which I respond too but the positive feedback makes a difference it really does Beki is a soul who shines and this poem is a wonderful poem Anni ~
Cloudthings

Cloudthings

16 years 12 months ago

Yah, Beki brings stars of her own making, it's lovely huh?

Thanks Steven, yes, but I think it could be difficult for you sometimes being used to so much praise can desensitize one. We kind of have to make effort to wipe the slate & return to humility, but I see you doing this regularly, it is a good thing I think. I agree it isn't about the stars, I love this place for you guys, & for the learning & skills & beauty & rwness & courage, occassionally the stars are an added boost. Yah, Beki brings stars of her own making, it's lovely huh? I guess in our way we all do, hers just sparkle so clearly. xxx~ Anni ~~~ "I feel no need for any other faith than my faith in the kindness of human beings. I am so absorbed in the wonder of earth and the life upon it that I cannot think of heaven and angels." Pearl S. Buck:

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