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Jun 17, 2009
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Ba Ba Black Sheep
BA BA BLACK SHEEP
The black
The sheep
Ba Ba
A metaphor
Souls cry
When consciousness
Is weak
Souls loved
Some lay in dust
Soul that are condemned
Are black sheep
When called
This sheep ?
Calling BA BA
A metaphor
For saying
Why can’t I be loved
Am I flesh and skin
I am still a sheep
Can one word make me
Condemned
If this sheep is condemned
It will be all it can be
And one day
This sheep
Will live without
No more black
Not more Ba
Ba
But only just a sheep
But the other sheep
Never had to face
A truth
A reality
They carrier
A secret
A question
Am I to
A black sheep
Can I find my place
This black sheep is glad
When one sheep asked
Do you feel blessed
With the blackness
Condemning your past
Why do you ask
This sheep of black
Are you now condemned
Did you think color
Would give you
A free pass
The black
The sheep
Ba Ba
A metaphor
Souls cry
When consciousness
Is weak
Souls loved
Some lay in dust
Soul that are condemned
Are black sheep
When called
This sheep ?
Calling BA BA
A metaphor
For saying
Why can’t I be loved
Am I flesh and skin
I am still a sheep
Can one word make me
Condemned
If this sheep is condemned
It will be all it can be
And one day
This sheep
Will live without
No more black
Not more Ba
Ba
But only just a sheep
But the other sheep
Never had to face
A truth
A reality
They carrier
A secret
A question
Am I to
A black sheep
Can I find my place
This black sheep is glad
When one sheep asked
Do you feel blessed
With the blackness
Condemning your past
Why do you ask
This sheep of black
Are you now condemned
Did you think color
Would give you
A free pass
— press, Jun 17, 2009
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Critiques
Fleur MacDonald
16 years 12 months ago
There are some fantastic lines
press
16 years 11 months ago
Ba Ba RE
Fleur MacDonald
16 years 11 months ago
Wow!!!!
Seren
16 years 12 months ago
Thats starting to touch the
press
16 years 11 months ago
Ba Ba RE
Seren
16 years 11 months ago
Now your being Cheeky lol
Rett
16 years 11 months ago
Well son, now that you have heard from others
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