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Meet me at the tower, we'll do some gardening amid the butterflies (The 5th of several "Odes")

Anna, planter of seeds
Dibbler in sun-flecked mellow garden
Peace is always aura,
lurking close if shed for a moment of unruly frolic
Joy also, not far
tainting even sadness
Light, a halo softly warm
My image,
lovely ageless woman laughing,
graceful hand holds greatness to heel
No need for showy paces,
lest it disturb the simple interaction
life… with life
… And yes, these hauntings
Beloved heart of depth unplumbed
So vast this potential
So fecund this everything, this woman
Love that slips, is sliced or stolen
Away
Away…
We, Autumn leaves in freedom
Heart shaped, red, skeletal
Tumbling, wind chased, thin, down the lane toward the winter
And yet, within
still beats more warmly, dear one
The glowing, crimson centre of a thousand joys and sorrows
Look! It was an effigy, of nature’s fashioning
And we giggle
In the “Now”
The “Is”
Our lord of moments
The only "real" there is…
Love will never cease from you
Nor the flowing sweet toward you
Abundantly
You are harbour
And you are butterfly
gentle winged
landing light upon this world
upon our hearts
wings so vibrant with wisdom and experience

You bring me happy tears
I am so warmed by the company of grace
More frequently I stumble upon the Eden of my dreams
those without an architect, if not serendipity
This Babylon of poetry
a tower to the endless quest of language clarity and deeper understanding…
Anna, I find you always at it’s peak
those graceful, exquisite wings flex mesmerising in the sunlight and fresh coolness
undaunted by the storms and passions
drama, joy, grief
You shape them and set them free
allowed to flow so gracefully to our eyes
transformed within your chrysalis my friend
awakened to freedom with exquisite wings
and here, amongst your many gifts
unlooked for
is the seed
May I offer you the bloom, the fruit, the kiss of gratitude?
— Cloudthings, Jun 18, 2009

About the Author

Region, Country: Australia, regional Victoria, AUS

Favorite Poets: So many... Rumi, Spike Milligan, Keats. Many of the Neopoet clan, past & present. A myriad of song writers, Dylan, Jackson Browne, Lior, & I must add the poetic influence of painters, sculptors & creators across the world... Life really, especially the sky.

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Seren

Seren

16 years 11 months ago

It is colourful like Anna ,

It is colourful like Anna , its vibrant like Anna ... I think that darling lady would be hard to catch , she would be darting around away from the butterfly net , for thats how I see her a dancing butterfly like her picture ... Beautiful work that is Anna ... Love Jayne
Cloudthings

Cloudthings

16 years 11 months ago

Hey, how was that gorgeous ode to you from this morning... wooho

Thanks Jayne, it looks clumsy after the day away from it, especially in comparison to the work Anna writes... sigh, response writes in instant splay can be dangerous... I wrote this this morning after a comment Anna left for me that made me weep. Shheeeesh she's inspiring that woman huh? Hey, how was that gorgeous ode to you from this morning... woohoo, that was something huh... & perfectly captured you... I was so happy reading it, I could not have written it half as well, he really got you, & hooray as well, it was lovely to have you acknowledged so well. You are so lovely & generous here on Neo. Take care It's nice messaging someone who has the same time period... where this morning for you was this morning for me!!! xxx~ Anni ~~~ "Courage, it would seem, is nothing less than the power to overcome danger, misfortune, fear, injustice, while continuing to affirm inwardly that life with all its sorrows is good; that everything is meaningful even if in a sense beyond o
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barbsdad2003

16 years 11 months ago

Hey, hey ...

hey! A beautiful write, this. Astonishing. Depthful. Wonderful. Can't say enough. And if I should try, I'd say too much. Gratefully, Chuck
Cloudthings

Cloudthings

16 years 11 months ago

Ah Chuck, with your wonderful succinct precision & clear minded

Ah Chuck, with your wonderful succinct precision & clear minded integrity... Thank you so much. I feel the first several lines are dull somehow, there are lines later I feel might do Anna justice, but I don't feel in the beginning they are beautiful enoiugh... I shall make some time after responding here, to look at it. Is that raccoon still there? Hope it doesn't poo in your lounge room!!! Warmly~ Anni ~~~ "Courage, it would seem, is nothing less than the power to overcome danger, misfortune, fear, injustice, while continuing to affirm inwardly that life with all its sorrows is good; that everything is meaningful even if in a sense beyond o
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barbsdad2003

16 years 11 months ago

That ...

particular racky's spooked now; no trouble. But others haunt the premises ready---whenever---to take her uninvited place. The burglar's mask's so apt. Thanx, Chuck
Geezer

Geezer

16 years 11 months ago

I have read

I have read some of Anna's work, but now I will have to read it all. A daunting task to say the least. But, from the words I see, [both her's, and now your praise of her], I will have to find the time to read every speck. Awesome work, an ode to remember! Gee.
Cloudthings

Cloudthings

16 years 11 months ago

Perfect Gee, if writing this brings even just one more person to

Perfect Gee, if writing this brings even just one more person to the joy & wisdom & depth of the lovely Anna then I am happy. It is well worth the effort & time, wonderful stuff every line (& I admit often the jewels are in reading Anna's comments as well). Anna is an amazing & constant inspiration here for me. I should tell you that my next ode was to be for you for your lovely loyalty & more, since a big part of my aspiration was to return some of the warmth & support I have constantly been offered here in Neo by writers who seem to loyally & lovingly been there for me in a huge variety of ways... But a comment Anna made yesterday morning moved me to tears & this fell out. Shortly I will see if I can do justice to Gee, I admit feeling challenged, we are so different, but challenge is good. Enjoy Kailashana xxx ~ Anni ~~~ "Courage, it would seem, is nothing less than the power to overcome danger, misfortune, fear, injustice, while continuing to affirm inwardly that life with all its sorrows is good; that everything is meaningful even if in a sense beyond o
Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years 11 months ago

My beautiful sweet Anni (of

My beautiful sweet Anni (of course that would be your name ;-) Sometimes I just have to thank God/ess for the gift of poetry, of meeting *you* and being touched by an angel. Love. ~A "There are very few human beings who receive the truth, complete and staggering, by instant illumination. Most of them acquire it fragment by fragment, on a small scale, by successive developments, cellularly, like a laborious mosaic." Anais Nin
Cloudthings

Cloudthings

16 years 11 months ago

I wonder if poets do what we do because we see/feel so much more

Anna, as so often occurs, the words you use here say exactly how I feel also, but written more perfectly than I might so I will just be mirror here, with much love & gratitude. I do want to just comment on the Anais (Te Ann clan variation again!) quote, how perfect... & in keeping with the theme indeed. We are so very blessed as poets I think, to be able to express things & reach people in ways many struggle to do, but we are possibly also more able to see it in the works & often the lives & actions of others as well... I wonder if poets do what we do because we see/feel so much more in the world, & can't possibly contain it... must find a way of expressing it... That's how I feel most days... I am driven to write, life is too big & too beautiful & too tragic to go unacknowledged (though I am fully aware that so often beauty is a poem in itself & needs no words... they are the REALLY magic moments... but I htink it's in the need to share for me (not sure).) In any case Anna, you do this so perfectly in my mind, both in your poetry & your comments & now I am moved to weep again (PMT I suspect!, slightly more likely to weep at lifes majesty), but for me, this is no small thing... it is, apart from my child & loves, one of the biggest, a part of me so deep I cannot be me without it, I feel you are the same Much love~ Anni ~~~ "Courage, it would seem, is nothing less than the power to overcome danger, misfortune, fear, injustice, while continuing to affirm inwardly that life with all its sorrows is good; that everything is meaningful even if in a sense beyond o
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bjp

16 years 11 months ago

Dear Anni,

There you are. And what makes Anna so special that she gets a rhyme free zone? Just kidding around. Lots and lots of collections of phrases: Love that slips, is sliced or stolen Away Away… We, Autumn leaves in freedom Heart shaped, red, skeletal Tumbling, wind chased, thin, down the lane toward the winter And yet, within still beats more warmly, dear one The glowing, crimson centre of a thousand joys and sorrows Look! It was an effigy, of nature’s fashioning And we giggle In the “Now” The “Is” More frequently I stumble upon the Eden of my dreams those without an architect, if not serendipity This Babylon of poetry Beauties. Sooth to tender tribe you are. I meant, some time ago, to encourage really, a movie called The Aristocrats. It is a documentary about artist courage, a comedic rosary, but very dark, rank, difficult and, therefore, important. Think of it as the comedic equivalent of the medical right of passage, where budding doctors have to suffer through three hours of porn movies, moving from awkward to bored, so that the real discussion of sex in medicine can begin in the classroom. As to one of the most exceptional TV series (right in there with Rome, Newsroom, and a few others) consider Deadwood. Parts can be enormously difficult to watch, for you especially I think, but it grows like the town into community and one begins to see the interrelationships between dark and light so much more easily. I endorse renting a couple of years of episodes (about 22). The writer wrote the whole script in a group setting, dictating to a typist. Often the script was written the same day as shooting. There are great levels of historical accuracy in the flavours of this depiction. I have been to Deadwood, in the Black Hills of South Dakota, it is not really that far from here, perhaps 500 miles. Very close to Mount Rushmore, both being built on stolen Indian land. But to warn again, Deadwood was a notoriously lawless town, one of the last holdouts of the old west. 90% male, lots of violence, the few women were predominantly creatures of male comfort and abuse. Its script rests heavily on classical Greek notions of presentment and staging. The language is probably a little more casually cursive than Australia, although it also becomes more complex, subtle, inverted and metaphorical as the series runs. Won loads of prizes. If you get past the first six, you're away. Much like the doctors acclimatizing. I guess I have caught the blurts. Brian

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