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Jun 18, 2009
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Meet me at the tower, we'll do some gardening amid the butterflies (The 5th of several "Odes")
Anna, planter of seeds
Dibbler in sun-flecked mellow garden
Peace is always aura,
lurking close if shed for a moment of unruly frolic
Joy also, not far
tainting even sadness
Light, a halo softly warm
My image,
lovely ageless woman laughing,
graceful hand holds greatness to heel
No need for showy paces,
lest it disturb the simple interaction
life… with life
… And yes, these hauntings
Beloved heart of depth unplumbed
So vast this potential
So fecund this everything, this woman
Love that slips, is sliced or stolen
Away
Away…
We, Autumn leaves in freedom
Heart shaped, red, skeletal
Tumbling, wind chased, thin, down the lane toward the winter
And yet, within
still beats more warmly, dear one
The glowing, crimson centre of a thousand joys and sorrows
Look! It was an effigy, of nature’s fashioning
And we giggle
In the “Now”
The “Is”
Our lord of moments
The only "real" there is…
Love will never cease from you
Nor the flowing sweet toward you
Abundantly
You are harbour
And you are butterfly
gentle winged
landing light upon this world
upon our hearts
wings so vibrant with wisdom and experience
You bring me happy tears
I am so warmed by the company of grace
More frequently I stumble upon the Eden of my dreams
those without an architect, if not serendipity
This Babylon of poetry
a tower to the endless quest of language clarity and deeper understanding…
Anna, I find you always at it’s peak
those graceful, exquisite wings flex mesmerising in the sunlight and fresh coolness
undaunted by the storms and passions
drama, joy, grief
You shape them and set them free
allowed to flow so gracefully to our eyes
transformed within your chrysalis my friend
awakened to freedom with exquisite wings
and here, amongst your many gifts
unlooked for
is the seed
May I offer you the bloom, the fruit, the kiss of gratitude?
Dibbler in sun-flecked mellow garden
Peace is always aura,
lurking close if shed for a moment of unruly frolic
Joy also, not far
tainting even sadness
Light, a halo softly warm
My image,
lovely ageless woman laughing,
graceful hand holds greatness to heel
No need for showy paces,
lest it disturb the simple interaction
life… with life
… And yes, these hauntings
Beloved heart of depth unplumbed
So vast this potential
So fecund this everything, this woman
Love that slips, is sliced or stolen
Away
Away…
We, Autumn leaves in freedom
Heart shaped, red, skeletal
Tumbling, wind chased, thin, down the lane toward the winter
And yet, within
still beats more warmly, dear one
The glowing, crimson centre of a thousand joys and sorrows
Look! It was an effigy, of nature’s fashioning
And we giggle
In the “Now”
The “Is”
Our lord of moments
The only "real" there is…
Love will never cease from you
Nor the flowing sweet toward you
Abundantly
You are harbour
And you are butterfly
gentle winged
landing light upon this world
upon our hearts
wings so vibrant with wisdom and experience
You bring me happy tears
I am so warmed by the company of grace
More frequently I stumble upon the Eden of my dreams
those without an architect, if not serendipity
This Babylon of poetry
a tower to the endless quest of language clarity and deeper understanding…
Anna, I find you always at it’s peak
those graceful, exquisite wings flex mesmerising in the sunlight and fresh coolness
undaunted by the storms and passions
drama, joy, grief
You shape them and set them free
allowed to flow so gracefully to our eyes
transformed within your chrysalis my friend
awakened to freedom with exquisite wings
and here, amongst your many gifts
unlooked for
is the seed
May I offer you the bloom, the fruit, the kiss of gratitude?
— Cloudthings, Jun 18, 2009
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Critiques
Seren
16 years 11 months ago
It is colourful like Anna ,
Cloudthings
16 years 11 months ago
Hey, how was that gorgeous ode to you from this morning... wooho
barbsdad2003
16 years 11 months ago
Hey, hey ...
Cloudthings
16 years 11 months ago
Ah Chuck, with your wonderful succinct precision & clear minded
barbsdad2003
16 years 11 months ago
That ...
Geezer
16 years 11 months ago
I have read
Cloudthings
16 years 11 months ago
Perfect Gee, if writing this brings even just one more person to
Kailashana
16 years 11 months ago
My beautiful sweet Anni (of
Cloudthings
16 years 11 months ago
I wonder if poets do what we do because we see/feel so much more
bjp
16 years 11 months ago
Dear Anni,
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