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Rain

The downfall of heaven's tears
cleanses the world of some
fears.

Pure, liquid drops, tickle
my window pane
causing me to view my surroundings,
in all the rain.

I curl up to a good book
and warm fire and
my lover beside me,
I so desire.

Later, in our bed, damp with
our bodies and sweat,
I finally realize how much I love the rain
and all the wet.
— dina grey, Jun 26, 2009

About the Author

Region, Country: Coastal area, NC

Favorite Poets: Sylvia Plath, Hemminway, Too many.....will add in time.

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yenti

yenti

16 years 10 months ago

Dina

Cute little piece as the rain came down, one place I saw two and's I think the second one can be washed away:- and warm fire (and) Keep up the good work as it is harder to make a point with few words and you did this well here, Yours Ian.T

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