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Jun 26, 2009
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Rain
The downfall of heaven's tears
cleanses the world of some
fears.
Pure, liquid drops, tickle
my window pane
causing me to view my surroundings,
in all the rain.
I curl up to a good book
and warm fire and
my lover beside me,
I so desire.
Later, in our bed, damp with
our bodies and sweat,
I finally realize how much I love the rain
and all the wet.
cleanses the world of some
fears.
Pure, liquid drops, tickle
my window pane
causing me to view my surroundings,
in all the rain.
I curl up to a good book
and warm fire and
my lover beside me,
I so desire.
Later, in our bed, damp with
our bodies and sweat,
I finally realize how much I love the rain
and all the wet.
— dina grey, Jun 26, 2009
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