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Jun 29, 2009
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baptism
the river Jordan flows
into the sea
i have met countless
John-the-Baptists
i have met many a
Pontius Pilate
but it is always
Judas
whom i shall
love,
who else shall
baptise me
when the last
veil of me
red like the setting
sun,
is torn to shreds
and I stand there,
ashamed.
~A
into the sea
i have met countless
John-the-Baptists
i have met many a
Pontius Pilate
but it is always
Judas
whom i shall
love,
who else shall
baptise me
when the last
veil of me
red like the setting
sun,
is torn to shreds
and I stand there,
ashamed.
~A
— Kailashana, Jun 29, 2009
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Seren
16 years 11 months ago
Anna this is so beautifully
Kailashana
16 years 11 months ago
I laugh…. WHERE do they
Seren
16 years 11 months ago
Anna
Kailashana
16 years 11 months ago
heheheh. 2 days later, and
Seren
16 years 11 months ago
Poetry is sometimes all life is
Candlewitch
16 years 11 months ago
=0
Kailashana
16 years 11 months ago
Thanks Cat, i love your
orgami
16 years 11 months ago
thirty peices
Kailashana
16 years 11 months ago
Can you imagine being Judas,
Nordic cloud
16 years 11 months ago
This is a good image
Kailashana
16 years 11 months ago
Betrayal… without
bjp
16 years 11 months ago
Dear Anna,
Kailashana
16 years 11 months ago
Perfect love asks no
faerybeki
16 years 11 months ago
Anna, this carries so much
Kailashana
16 years 11 months ago
How beautifully you put
faerybeki
16 years 11 months ago
A poem, EH? x
Cloudthings
16 years 11 months ago
why should we not take our own baptism shed the shame beside the
Kailashana
16 years 11 months ago
We speak from the same
Arrow
16 years 11 months ago
I hate to keep coming by only to say
Kailashana
16 years 11 months ago
Always straight to the
leonard daranjo
16 years 11 months ago
Hi Ana
Kailashana
16 years 11 months ago
We all play our roles out,
Tam the Chanter
16 years 11 months ago
baptism
Kailashana
16 years 11 months ago
Thank you Ian. That was my
paparazii
16 years 11 months ago
Very good
Kailashana
16 years 11 months ago
Thank you. And here i
themoonman
16 years 11 months ago
Anna...
Kailashana
16 years 11 months ago
Thank you for gracing my
weirdelf
16 years 11 months ago
goddess, dance with me
Kailashana
16 years 11 months ago
Bow. Shameless, we dance
Quillsvein1
16 years 11 months ago
Beautiful poem
Kailashana
16 years 11 months ago
I respect immensely your
Quillsvein1
16 years 11 months ago
Well
bjp
16 years 11 months ago
Dear guillsvein1,
Quillsvein1
16 years 11 months ago
I'm just not
weirdelf
16 years 11 months ago
Who cares about the historical accuracy of Jesus?
Kailashana
16 years 11 months ago
Thank you, also. As we are
Ink Dragon
16 years 11 months ago
Anna,
Kailashana
16 years 11 months ago
Baptism…. is an immersion
Fleur MacDonald
16 years 11 months ago
This is quite profound
Kailashana
16 years 11 months ago
No need to bow beautiful
Eduardo Cruz
16 years 11 months ago
Anna
Kailashana
16 years 11 months ago
I’m pleasantly surprised,
Tam the Chanter
16 years 11 months ago
baptism
Kailashana
16 years 11 months ago
Yes!!!!! I accept my
DarkinAZ
16 years 11 months ago
Well I agree with Quills.....
Kailashana
16 years 11 months ago
Ahhh. you have
DarkinAZ
16 years 11 months ago
I just urge you to read 2
Kailashana
16 years 11 months ago
This?1 Corinthians 2 10
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