THE POSITIVE THE NEGATIVE

This is the second comment you wrote to me ? I consider personal the first one [ But you don’t read much poetry, do you Press. The second one was, Who can tell? You say nothing much.].And these are the words of a [advocates] ?. I wonder ! are you evaluating , Press a person or the poem Press wrote ? In my opinion , when you comment with words like [you] verses words like [your poem or your poetry]. Makes it very clear , these comments contain the word [you] example in your own words [ do you Press] meaning Press meaning a personal comment. Not one time was [your poetry , your poem or this poem] wrote in these comments . And to add [see how I use words like your comments ! and not , you wrote this or you say noting much] . Question Jess ? were in these comments is [ your] help ? What is [your]evaluation that this poems needs . Their is not even and example , to help my poems improve. Jess did you , and yes I said you ? forget about this . What did you think of my title? [My title in this poem] How was my language use? [ My language in this poem] What did you think of the rhythm or pattern or pacing? [ About this poem ] How does this theme appeal to you? How was the beginning/ending of the poem? Is the internal logic consistent? Press