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The Eye of an Evil Storm

I have seen,bent over a radiant rainbow,flashes of iridescent joystriating a quilted sky Stars coalescedin one great narcotic flashI was whispered tothat I could,in return for a poundof burning flesh,carry a modicumof such brightness home I weakened and  wiltedunder the weightof an obscurantist shadowreclining listlesslyin the eye of an evil storm 
— leonard daranjo, Jul 08, 2009

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Ink Dragon

16 years 11 months ago

Leonard,

what a beautiful antagonistic juxtaposition of light and darkness. Yours, ~Nina

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