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Jul 08, 2009
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The Eye of an Evil Storm
I have seen,bent over a radiant rainbow,flashes of iridescent joystriating a quilted sky Stars coalescedin one great narcotic flashI was whispered tothat I could,in return for a poundof burning flesh,carry a modicumof such brightness home I weakened and wiltedunder the weightof an obscurantist shadowreclining listlesslyin the eye of an evil storm
— leonard daranjo, Jul 08, 2009
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Ink Dragon
16 years 11 months ago
Leonard,
leonard daranjo
16 years 11 months ago
Thank you Nina
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