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Nilmini
Nilmini
Jul 12, 2009 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Another Chance

God have mercyGive me another chanceLet me erase the past& change my cast My life has beena big mistakeLord, give me power                      to cut & paste Oh, how I like                               to change my life,especially the partsI cried & sighed Can I choose                              the actors in my play?If so, it'll be                                 my happiest day! Your Holiness, give me          insight to realise                      what’s going on                        inside their closed minds.
— Nilmini, Jul 12, 2009

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HAPPYGEORGE

16 years 11 months ago

Nice poem with beutiful lines ...

Nilmini I read your poem...Very touching words coming from the deapth of your inner heart...But be optimistic in this world of darkness...You are a true poet..Keep it up..All my blessings...HAPPY GEORGE IRELAND
Nilmini

Nilmini

16 years 11 months ago

Thank you!

Wow... thank you sooooo much George. I never expected such kind words re. this poem from any one. Although those were the actual feelings that were running in my mind at the time I wrote them, I thought that this has no value at all as a poem. In fact, you wouldn't believe if I say that I wrote this a long time ago & kept it hidding thinking that it is not up to the standard to publish. So, after seeing your comments my way of thinking has got a boost and thanks to you, I might consider publishing some more poems that I wrote. Thanks again. Nilmini

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