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Jul 13, 2009
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the cat is curled
the cat is curled
in a ball,
red, orange, green and gold
silk cushions
she sleeps near
the sun
an old woman's snore
fading fast
like colours of silk,
red, orange, green and gold.
in a ball,
red, orange, green and gold
silk cushions
she sleeps near
the sun
an old woman's snore
fading fast
like colours of silk,
red, orange, green and gold.
— Kailashana, Jul 13, 2009
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infinite_dwarf
16 years 11 months ago
Anna
Kailashana
16 years 11 months ago
Both. I have 4 large silk
Candlewitch
16 years 11 months ago
Hi Anna
meic
16 years 11 months ago
Can’t keep cats anymore
Kailashana
16 years 11 months ago
Thanks for sharing your
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