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michaelfirewalker

Jul 15, 2009 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Women Rising

rising green and wild blown
determined madness freed
by eyes that linger
keenly seen
to hold old sadness
born of love
once intimately known
still deeply missed

she's worshipped long
meticulously kissed
softly slow into the heat
and then explored
luxuriously
tenderly to bliss
by both thee
and me

— michaelfirewalker, Jul 15, 2009

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16 years 11 months ago

I'm unsure

so I thought I would ask... is this poem about a threesome? It is very good. Keep writing. Always, Cat

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michaelfirewalker

16 years 11 months ago

hello Cat…that’s right,

hello Cat...that's right, it's a threesome...am glad you liked it... and thanks for reading, michael

16 years 3 months ago

clever, secretive, and open

clever, secretive, and open all at once.

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michaelfirewalker

16 years 3 months ago

Women Rising

I like that description, whitetea...thanks! michael

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