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Jul 18, 2009
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RANDOM PATHS
I stumble in your footsteps
because your path is not
for me Instead i linger in
your shadow close enough
to hear you say,
"follow me if you may
i am not leading you
astray "
I don't follow and you don't
lead, our paths are random
life's in tandem
Days come and go
friendships fail or grow
time will tell if we bond
and gel
Conversation between as
pleasant as the warmth of
a gentle breeze,
Linger a while when you talk
I smile .
— ziggy, Jul 18, 2009
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Seren
16 years 11 months ago
This is just beautiful
ziggy
16 years 11 months ago
hi
hugo la rosa
16 years 11 months ago
ziggy
ziggy
16 years 10 months ago
helo there , glad you like
lyz
16 years 8 months ago
I see what u mean
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