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Jul 25, 2009
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MIA CULPA
Mia culpa!
Why is it always my fault? to look up at the stars seeking... Seeing only the far off twinkling. of Chimeras beyond grasp -
Exasperation has me clasped! Mia culpa! to want to understand why love's lustful longings should always run dry -
people grow wings, get up and fly. Why is it my fault too... to have to say sorry, grovel and grasp - to want more, than I am given to ask... Is this mere cowardice or the better part of valour? to take on the blame rather than seem dull & callow? Is this just Life's lesson to teach me "to fast" To live off slivers and be given 'tests' - only saints could pass ?
BjR 25 July 2009
callow: young and inexperienced; immature
chimera:an impossible or foolish fancy
— Bonitaj, Jul 25, 2009
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Baz
16 years 10 months ago
Love it
Bonitaj
16 years 10 months ago
Hello Barry!
bjp
16 years 10 months ago
Dear Bonita,
Bonitaj
16 years 10 months ago
I loved your extrapolation
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