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Aug 03, 2009
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And Nothing Shall Be Hidden
And Nothing Shall Be Hidden....
And death is like a woman
who stands before her lover
and lets her body
{like a
long
silk
dress}
fall slowly to the floor....
— Diatom Shells, Aug 03, 2009
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Diatom Shells
16 years 10 months ago
didn’t work
Diatom Shells
16 years 10 months ago
and nothing shall be hidden
Cloudthings
16 years 10 months ago
May I suggest, copying to "Notepad", then recopy from notepad to
Diatom Shells
16 years 10 months ago
argh
Diatom Shells
16 years 10 months ago
there i did a dfferent poem instead
Ink Dragon
16 years 10 months ago
Hi Diatom Shells,
Candlewitch
16 years 10 months ago
Hello
Diatom Shells
16 years 10 months ago
aah
Kailashana
16 years 10 months ago
This is an amazing write.
Diatom Shells
16 years 10 months ago
sure
barbsdad2003
16 years 10 months ago
At the risk of plagiarizing ...
Diatom Shells
16 years 10 months ago
ah
Seren
16 years 10 months ago
WoW this is am amazing piece
Diatom Shells
16 years 10 months ago
hello jayne
Marie-I-Be
16 years 10 months ago
lovely intrigue
Diatom Shells
16 years 10 months ago
yes
greeneyes
16 years 10 months ago
great work
Diatom Shells
16 years 10 months ago
im glad
Diatom Shells
16 years 9 months ago
heres the poem
Dalton
16 years ago
Diatom shells
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