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Aug 03, 2009
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Hunger
Hunger
tangerine dreams
awaken me
your lips on mine
your eyes full of smoke
the fire within
never
dies down
we make love
in the Light
tangerine dreams
awaken me
your lips on mine
your eyes full of smoke
the fire within
never
dies down
we make love
in the Light
— Kailashana, Aug 03, 2009
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Critiques
Ink Dragon
16 years 10 months ago
Anna,
Kailashana
16 years 10 months ago
Ecstatic being IS touching
Tam the Chanter
16 years 10 months ago
hunger
Kailashana
16 years 10 months ago
yesireeeeeeeeee Ian,
Sin
16 years 10 months ago
Hunger
Kailashana
16 years 10 months ago
Thank you Sin, (kinda funny
2 Quills
16 years 10 months ago
A hell of a thing indeed.
Kailashana
16 years 10 months ago
I see a beautiful new
Diatom Shells
16 years 10 months ago
lover of few lines
Kailashana
16 years 10 months ago
And you my dear, have made
Diatom Shells
16 years 10 months ago
well
Nordic cloud
16 years 10 months ago
Tangerine so bitter sweet
Kailashana
16 years 10 months ago
Yes, it is close, Ann.
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