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Aug 13, 2009
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Grooves on Vinyl
My mother played music
to me in the womb.
[It disfigured me only little:
waves of sound are burned into my fingertips.]
It must have been music.
It must have been its deep rhythms
against her stomach
that made me imagine
that I felt the world kick
beneath the hand I held
to the wall of her womb.
— Diatom Shells, Aug 13, 2009
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Kailashana
16 years 10 months ago
Rarely have I ever read a
Diatom Shells
16 years 10 months ago
yes..
Eduardo Cruz
16 years 10 months ago
Dia,
Diatom Shells
16 years 10 months ago
buenos dias..
orgami
16 years 10 months ago
she made me talk to our unborn still in my work clothes/boots
Diatom Shells
16 years 10 months ago
thats..
Diatom Shells
16 years 10 months ago
this was a double post
Ink Dragon
16 years 10 months ago
Diatom Shells,
Diatom Shells
16 years 10 months ago
lol...hiding
Candlewitch
16 years 10 months ago
Music
Diatom Shells
16 years 10 months ago
i've heard..
Seren
16 years 10 months ago
Diatom Shells
Diatom Shells
16 years 10 months ago
thank you...
odd molly
16 years 10 months ago
Lovely to see such a
Diatom Shells
16 years 10 months ago
hi...
orgami
16 years 10 months ago
"disfigured me only a little.."
Diatom Shells
16 years 10 months ago
beautifully ...
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