My thoughts. {{edited}}

Why get punished for the truth?
For whats really true?
People beg for Honesty
but when they get it...
just cause its not great...
they seem to run and attack.
If you want some honesty,
shut up and take it.

The worlds so messed up
Liars huddling in groups,
Like they're plotting some ones death.
This is the bigger picture,
the one you CANT see!

You want some suggestions?
It's called an opinion.
Everyone has one,
You and I, myself and you.
My friends and yours,
and yet you must argue
must vent and start fuss.

Vent in a letter.
not where I have to watch,
as awesome poet leaves...
This worlds so messed up,
cause honesty IS the best policy.

— ANC1996, Sep 04, 2009

About the Author

Region, Country: Florida, ZZC

Favorite Poets: Edgar Allan Poe, Shakespeare, Homer.

Critiques

Seren

16 years 9 months ago

Dearest Adri

as they say"and a child will lead the way "from the mouths of babes ... you speak some very adult truths here Adri my darlin' I hope others take heed and read as well :) love and big hug Jayne x x "We did not change as we grew older; we just became more clearly ourselves. Lynn Hall"

ANC1996

16 years 9 months ago

:))

Thanks so much,, Im glad you liked it :) Peace Out;; Adri! "If you dont like me remeber;; Its mind over matter!I dont mind and you dont matter!"

Rett

16 years 9 months ago

Adri, very good

I would add it to this line ...have to let (it) out. Respectfully, Rett: "When I was born I was so surprised I didn't talk for a year and a half." Gracie Allen

ANC1996

16 years 9 months ago

:)

Thanks Rett,, I think i will.. I didnt really like that line the way it wasss Peace!!! Adri,, "If you dont like me remeber;;ITs mind over matter.I dont mind and you dont matter!"

bella1

16 years 9 months ago