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The Light Of Darkness
The Light of Darkness
The dark has always frightened me
since I was just a child
The minute that the sun went down
the demons all went wild
They preyed on the young and tender
they knew right where you were
They'd steal your soul and eat your heart
'least, that is what I heard
A child I am no longer..
I stand before you grown
The dark is now a welcomed sight
a place thats ours alone
A place that wraps around us
a place where yes, we dwell
Somewhere far from heaven...
sometimes close to hell
You have reached me as no other..
you have touched my very core
All I am, and all I will be
only yours.... forever more
As you take me, and possess me
drink your fill, and you will see..
As our juices flow together
joined forever......blessed be.
Sue
Critiques
lyz
16 years 8 months ago
Dear Jetz
jetz
16 years 8 months ago
Hiya Lyz, Sorry I kept
Tony Udo
16 years 8 months ago
It’s strange how that
jetz
16 years 8 months ago
Hi Tony, Thanks so much
hippiepoet69
16 years 5 months ago
Verry Strong poem
jetz
16 years 5 months ago
Thanks Huey, It’s nice
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