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Ink Dragon
Oct 06, 2009 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Birds of a feather - the end

moved to http://www.neopoet.com/node/28137
— Ink Dragon, Oct 06, 2009
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Candlewitch

Candlewitch

16 years 8 months ago

:)

Parts 1, and 2, are nicely brought together with this piece! My favorite lines: she never forgets to save some crumbs for her freezing feathered friends Always, Cat
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Ink Dragon

16 years 8 months ago

Cat,

thanks, I really appreciate your insight into this story. Yours, ~Nina
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Ink Dragon

16 years 8 months ago

Liz,

thank you for reading and for cheering me on ;) It is appreciated. Yours, ~Nina
Seren

Seren

16 years 8 months ago

Dearest Nina

This one is perfect :) made my heart ache ... with joy for a happy ending as it should be,from crumbs to life ... wonderful write Nina brings all three pieces together ... well done ... love and higgest bugs Jayne x x x
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Ink Dragon

16 years 8 months ago

Jayne,

I think this is the first poem with a happy ending that I have written for a long time. Strange how some things just fall into place when we write them down... Yours, ~Nina

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