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Similies of Love

Like a peacock in her majestic saunter
So elegant
Like a kissable mouth coated with a juicy lip shine
So inviting
Like a fresh morning dew on her leafy chair
So queenly
Like a cold breeze loaded with all the perfumes of Paris
So breathtaking
Like an ocean waving back and forth to kiss the lonely shores
So captivating
Like a galaxy of butterflies in their copulating season
An earthly rainbow
Like a stream zigzagging through the green woods
So enchanting
Like the mighty eagle taking his majestic gentle glide
So graceful
Like the daffodils dancing to the wind’s tender pushes
So splendid
Like an Ashanti queen in state besides her king son
So gorgeous
Like the full moon calling the wolves to howl at night
So amazing
Like penguins formation dive in the deep blue ocean
So fascinating
Like Santa Claus fulfilling a Christmas wish
A dream comes true
The above similes and more in store
Is what you are to me!


— adjei agyei-baah, Oct 10, 2009

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Candlewitch

Candlewitch

16 years 8 months ago

hello

I loved your similes and your title. The theme is great, and the poem flows well. Always, Cat
Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years 8 months ago

Like a love poem to the

Like a love poem to the queen of your heart, your poem is enticing and speaks with eloquence. ~A There are no strangers in Paradise.
AA

adjei agyei-baah

16 years 7 months ago

Touching

Thankx for your touching comment.In fact, i was sparked to write this piece when my Love wanted to find out how much she was worth to me.You had it right.watch out for more but do kindly rate the poem next time you comment.
jabuu

jabuu

16 years 8 months ago

welcome

similes of love. A good work.
Nordic cloud

Nordic cloud

16 years 7 months ago

Oh wildly rich this Adjel

I have no corrections as it is your mind supplying us with its own view of this tumble of similes, and I love it. Yours Ann of Norway
AA

adjei agyei-baah

16 years 7 months ago

Always be grateful

Thanks once again for commenting on my poem.You are a maven and doyen whose comment assures me that I am on the right path.I have mounted my latest work titled "Adam's Elegy" in response to the Ink Dragon's Eve's Elegy".You may also read "The Flowers Speak of Pain". Enjoy every bit of me.Tata!

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