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'Til End Of Time

'Til End Of Time

  Years of little knowledge
  Head buried in the sand
  Thinking life a fairy tale
  Finding instead Never Never Land

  One finds themselves soul searching
  Looking for the cause
  Finding nothing there
  Because it never was

  But always in the universe
  Somewhere..somehow..a plan
  Never to be altered
  Least not by mortal man

  Fate is never wrong
  It is just as it should be
  It always holds the answers
  It's up to us to see

  I remember that door closing
  Me left standing in the dark
  Little did I know
  That the dark would steal my heart

  I knew not then of soul mates
  I knew not of other lives
  I spent my time existing
  Trying only to survive

  From the dark I saw the light 
  Slowly knowledge did seep in
  And I saw the life we had
  That we now have once again

  Do I thank you for that knowledge
  Without you would I have seen
  I tend to think I wouldn't
  So much learned from all my dreams

  Within me you moved a mountain
  You've set my spirit free
  You've taught me of true love
  Taught me how to just be me

  Shown me visions of the past
  Glimpses of the future too
  Now I'm filled with all this knowledge
  All this knowledge that's me and you

  You're my teacher I'm your student
  You have filled my heart and mind
  Now I know that we are always..
  From way back when...'til end of time.

 Sue 

— jetz, Oct 10, 2009

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Region, Country: South eastern Connecticut, USA

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lyz

16 years 8 months ago

till the end of time

A well written piece indeed. A love for life. Thank u for sharing this beautiful poem. Love Lyz. XX
jetz

jetz

16 years 8 months ago

Hi Lyz, Once again, such

Hi Lyz, Once again, such a nice comment from you. Glad you enjoyed this piece, and as always, I truly appreciate you taking the time to read and respond. Sue
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Tony Udo

16 years 8 months ago

End OF Time

Wonderfully expressed, by a very lucky woman!
yenti

yenti

16 years 7 months ago

Hi Sue

This was a lovely journey that I hope you are still enjoying to the best of what we should give unconditionally, in some places just needs a tidy but this will not distract from finding your piece was really great, Look forward to reading more of your work, Yours Ian.T
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hippiepoet69

16 years 5 months ago

I LOVED it

This poem alone would make me a fan ofyour work. I noticed one poem broke from the rhyme pattern. But it is a Great poem to me. Now off to read another of your poems. Thank you Sue for a Great read

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