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Oct 12, 2009
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no escape
1.
a slowpoke cowboy
rests
against October sunset
2.
in an alternate sunset
she was a pole dancer
he had oily hands
reaching across the stage
behind preying eyes
dreams in a cocoon
3.
I can't go somewhere I've never been
if you don't show me the way
to Paradise at your side.
I can't even begin to tell you my story
if you don't listen with the silence
from which neither of us can hide
I can't see with your eyes
if you don't love with all your heart
You needn't build a bridge if
there is no river between us.
Just this quiet drowning.
Just this tender light.
Just this blue sky.
4.
poems
held
together
by
a
silk
thread
a slowpoke cowboy
rests
against October sunset
2.
in an alternate sunset
she was a pole dancer
he had oily hands
reaching across the stage
behind preying eyes
dreams in a cocoon
3.
I can't go somewhere I've never been
if you don't show me the way
to Paradise at your side.
I can't even begin to tell you my story
if you don't listen with the silence
from which neither of us can hide
I can't see with your eyes
if you don't love with all your heart
You needn't build a bridge if
there is no river between us.
Just this quiet drowning.
Just this tender light.
Just this blue sky.
4.
poems
held
together
by
a
silk
thread
— Kailashana, Oct 12, 2009
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Critiques
seabhac
16 years 8 months ago
Perfect title
Kailashana
16 years 8 months ago
Thank you Lyz. I think we
seabhac
16 years 8 months ago
Yes I feel we share much already in lifes journey
lyz
16 years 8 months ago
Dear Kailashana
Kailashana
16 years 8 months ago
Alas, they only meet in the
bjp
16 years 8 months ago
Dear Anna,
Kailashana
16 years 8 months ago
Oh Brian of the
Seren
16 years 8 months ago
Dearest Anna
Kailashana
16 years 8 months ago
Your right eye (as well as
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