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Feminine Lament/Poetic Prose

Feminine Lament


My carriage ached with emptiness of lifeless tides crashing its foam in swirling tirade of "Nor'easter."  Tears mingled, saline found vision halted.  Life drained with the power of its pull; cup emptied of life's liquid held but a moment before.

          Grasp the handle tightly
          grip a barren cup
          dreams deceive us nightly
          when the bottom side is up

no longer was a tiny heart-song heard.

A thousand tears drowned the vacancy of my flattened shadow; held spring seed with tender remorse, afraid to contaminate new sprouts as my affliction labored.

Bent with failure's feminine recognition, grief is my loneliness, and no supportive hand could find my soul.

Left to crumble into washed foam and rubble, aftermath mingled power and wilting beauty beneath parting clouds, and silence was left to sing as sea breeze failed to swell this womb with life.
— Pamela A. Lamppa, Oct 30, 2009

About the Author

Region, Country: New England - USA, USA

Favorite Poets: Robert Frost, Robert Louis Stevenson, William Butler Yeats, John Keats, Pablo Neruda, Algernon Charles Swinburne, T.S. Elliott, and too many more to begin to cover them all.

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Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years 7 months ago

I love these *prose* poems

I love these *prose* poems of yours, dear Pamela. What exaltation! Poems within a poem. L&L ~A "...when it agrees with reason and it will benefit one and all, then accept it and live by it." ~ Buddha
Pamela A. Lamppa

Pamela A. Lamppa

16 years 7 months ago

Thank you

I am so very pleased for your comment on this bit of prose. Thank you so much. ~Pamela

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