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Tick-tock Beat
The clock is ticking, ticking, ticking
The hands giving time a licking, licking
Faced with the hours, time's minutes stand
Racing against the second-hand
Tick, tick, tick, each time the pendulum swings
At the opposite end, tock, tock, tock, it sings
Wind up the clock, give a push to start
Tick-tock beat, like that of a heart
Tick-tock, tick-tock, tick-tock, tick-tock
All of time beating in a heart-shaped clock
How much time do we have left?
Do you want to know? Make a guess?
Tick, tick, tick, it could make you sick
Thinking about the time left to you
Tick-tock, tick-tock, the heart-shaped clock
Only has so much time that it will view
The hands of time, hours and minutes
Second-hand chasing the tick-tocks in it
Life is time, your's and mine
All you can ask... is time be kind
Tick-tock, tick-tock, tick-tock
Life in the heart-shaped clock
Critiques
Orphani
16 years 6 months ago
Geeze this is a great poem
Geezer
16 years 6 months ago
Never figured on being great...
Orphani
16 years 6 months ago
Are you familiar with Edgar
Geezer
16 years 6 months ago
Familiar...
hardcorechick28
16 years 6 months ago
i am quite familiar
Orphani
16 years 6 months ago
Some suggestions on the
Seren
16 years 6 months ago
Dearest Gee
Geezer
16 years 6 months ago
Be waiting on ya...
hardcorechick28
16 years 6 months ago
great poem
Geezer
16 years 6 months ago
Happy to be there...
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