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Delightful Dinner Date...{ A Killer Poem}

They have a shopping date, to get the dinner list

Killer needs ingredients, the paper crumpled in his fist

DeMona has come by and she's dressed to kill

They need fresh meat for tonight, so I guess they will

The market is real quiet, but has a good selection

There is a nice lean roast, in the veggie section

Just a little fat, to give it a juicy taste

But not enough to put, poundage on your waist

With all the courses of the meal, in the grocery-cart

They check-out right behind, the most important part

Killer puts the food into the backseat of the car

While DeMona, chases down the meat... before it gets too far

He pulls up in the alley, she's got the deed all done

Killer's disappointed, he wanted to join the fun

But she's so enthusiastic, his frown turns to a grin

All he can think of saying, is..."I'll help you get her in"

As they carry in the groceries, their hands and fingers meet

Killer thinks, " I wonder...will her lips be sweet?"

DeMona gets the sauce to simmer... he licks her fingertip

Killer chops and dices, making his favorite dip

The kitchen is nice and warm, and ever oh, so cozy

The windows covered and blacked out...The neighbors are real nosy

Gravy laden, tender roast, and finger-foods galore

Fried tongue, boiled eyes and shredded lips, do you want some more?

How about having room for juuust a little nibble?

There is one for you and one for me... a candy coated nipple

Killer sets the music low, and pushes back the chairs

Her body warm, her scent compells, and he is aware

She feels so natural in his arms

He's complety taken by her charms

Up the stairs...yes, leave it dark I say

We don't need to see, we'll surely find our way

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

— Geezer, Dec 02, 2009

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Region, Country: New York State - USA, USA

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Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years 6 months ago

I love to hate this poem.

I love to hate this poem. Too Dahmeresque and Sowellesque for my taste. ~A "...when it agrees with reason and it will benefit one and all, then accept it and live by it." ~ Buddha
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hardcorechick28

16 years 6 months ago

very well done

Done tastefully but in Killer/DeMona style!!!! I love it!!!! They are definitely a couple to be reckoned with. I will have DeMona's thoughts later on in the week for ya.....Great job!!!!
Nordic cloud

Nordic cloud

16 years 6 months ago

Bizzare! Roll about with the greens and the reds.

I come with a fresh mind, not knowing the above mentioned celebrities at all, Anna. So with that I can tumble into the shopping basket and roll about with the greens and the reds, the purples and even the PINKS, those unmentionables, tut tut. Suggestions are always stronger than the lain truth aren't they? Quite apart from this I remember in a film a neighbour going to another and asking: "Have you got some oregano," and her answer was: "Oh no love, I visited the doctor yesterday." And here you are with the oregano Sir Gee, you didn't tell your Queen about such goings on!! What next!!! Love to you and your faithful wife dear Knight of the Realm, from me.
Geezer

Geezer

16 years 6 months ago

Yes, Killer is...

bizzare, but reflects a part of me and society in general, that needs to shock and give people something a little naughty. I thought that giving the warning that this was a Killer poem would steer people clear if they did not wish to read of such goings on. I should have realised that there are those that do not know who Killer is. Sorry if you were dismayed. ~ My faithful wife and self send our love back,~ Sir Gee
Seren

Seren

16 years 6 months ago

Dear Gee

Really like where your taking these writes ... they are expanding beyond your reach and your on a roll ... they are developing substance that people cannt help but read ;) killer is getting his own following lol love and hugs Jayne x x x p.s Gee I keep forgetting to mention there are some australian books by and author called Robert Barrett ... his main character is a hitman kinda guy and your killer reminds me of him(his name is Les Norton) ... you should look for the books if you cannot find them I can send you copies
Geezer

Geezer

16 years 6 months ago

Even a Killer...

Needs good food, and a little recreation. I wasn't sure if this was the right direction to take Killer. I don't think I can give him a reason for every killing, and not sure I want to try. I can only say that he will never hurt a child. He seems to have an affection for helpless people that are bullied and hates animal abusers. He is however, not above taking a victim that is succulent, but not someone you want to see killed. In short, I guess he is a very complicated person. Glad you like this one. I will look for those books by Robert Barret. We have a very good library here. BTW, I love your new picture. Hope things are going well, I will keep in touch and send you all Killer's exploits. ~ Hig bugs, and lotsa love, Gee
Seren

Seren

16 years 6 months ago

Dear Gee

Most killers have two faces ... theres their killer face (in your case) and they have a street face the one the whole world sees ... by giving him depth and making him eat and love like the rest of us ... you connect him to us ... and the Robert Barratt books have been around for over 14 yrs my ex husband used to read them and I actually got hooked on him a little there was something about less norton he was a killer but you couldnt not love him and thats what struck me about this poem ... good work I love where your growing ;) and I mean growing not going lol love and higgliest bugs Jayne x x x
Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years 6 months ago

You know Gee, living through

You know Gee, living through the aftermath of a killer's killing spree (11 known, all but one identified) in Cleveland, I still bristle when I hear *animal* and other such words. So easy to dismiss a killer as inhuman, so much harder to understand that humanity produces both killers and lovers, sometimes in one human being. Hitler, after all loved his dog, his mother and Eva Braun. As I said, I love to hate this poem rather than the man behind the killer's mask. Thank you for allowing me to do so. ~A
Geezer

Geezer

16 years 6 months ago

You Know...

My pleasure. I always say that if I can elict some kind of response, that means I made it interesting enough and touched someone at some level. Thank you for your comments, and the integrity with which you expressed them. ~ Gee

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