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Delightful Dinner Date...{ A Killer Poem}
They have a shopping date, to get the dinner list
Killer needs ingredients, the paper crumpled in his fist
DeMona has come by and she's dressed to kill
They need fresh meat for tonight, so I guess they will
The market is real quiet, but has a good selection
There is a nice lean roast, in the veggie section
Just a little fat, to give it a juicy taste
But not enough to put, poundage on your waist
With all the courses of the meal, in the grocery-cart
They check-out right behind, the most important part
Killer puts the food into the backseat of the car
While DeMona, chases down the meat... before it gets too far
He pulls up in the alley, she's got the deed all done
Killer's disappointed, he wanted to join the fun
But she's so enthusiastic, his frown turns to a grin
All he can think of saying, is..."I'll help you get her in"
As they carry in the groceries, their hands and fingers meet
Killer thinks, " I wonder...will her lips be sweet?"
DeMona gets the sauce to simmer... he licks her fingertip
Killer chops and dices, making his favorite dip
The kitchen is nice and warm, and ever oh, so cozy
The windows covered and blacked out...The neighbors are real nosy
Gravy laden, tender roast, and finger-foods galore
Fried tongue, boiled eyes and shredded lips, do you want some more?
How about having room for juuust a little nibble?
There is one for you and one for me... a candy coated nipple
Killer sets the music low, and pushes back the chairs
Her body warm, her scent compells, and he is aware
She feels so natural in his arms
He's complety taken by her charms
Up the stairs...yes, leave it dark I say
We don't need to see, we'll surely find our way
Critiques
Kailashana
16 years 6 months ago
I love to hate this poem.
Geezer
16 years 6 months ago
I love to hate...
hardcorechick28
16 years 6 months ago
very well done
Nordic cloud
16 years 6 months ago
Bizzare! Roll about with the greens and the reds.
Geezer
16 years 6 months ago
Yes, Killer is...
Seren
16 years 6 months ago
Dear Gee
Geezer
16 years 6 months ago
Even a Killer...
Seren
16 years 6 months ago
Dear Gee
Kailashana
16 years 6 months ago
You know Gee, living through
Geezer
16 years 6 months ago
You Know...
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