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Taste My Lips

Cinnamon flavoured lips
taste and tease free moans
tremors are starting low
as kisses are softly sown

lifting to fill your mouth
and sliding to find our niche
don't roll your eyes around
its not time to go to sleep

sliding the volume low
rising to meet the plains
Ecstasy calls with shouts
and shadow whispers your name

rolling the carpets edge
in fingers that grasp to hold
bodies become as one
and spooning begins the mold

I glazed your eyes in glass
and your mouth does drip in awe
baby you want a hand?
getting up off the floor

— Seren, Dec 07, 2009

About the Author

Region, Country: Beyond the Black Stump..Australia, AUS

Favorite Poets: Pablo Neruda, P.K.Page, W.H.Auden, to many and various to include them all ...

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CyberSpace

16 years 6 months ago

:)

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Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years 6 months ago

Oh, u tease u. Don’t you

Oh, u tease u. Don't you get a rug burn in deep cyberspace? Miles of smiles, ~A "...when it agrees with reason and it will benefit one and all, then accept it and live by it." ~ Buddha
Seren

Seren

16 years 6 months ago

Dear Mum

LMAO .... I am the worst sort of tease lol .... I only get carpet burn on reentry hahahaha pmsl !!!!! love and hugs Jayne x x
Z

ziggy

16 years 6 months ago

hello

hi jayne brilliant i especially enjoyed the ending lines ,luv it ,ziggy
Seren

Seren

16 years 6 months ago

Dear Ziggy

I just wanted to lighten my mood and I think it worked ... thanks for your comment ... and those last lines where tonuge in cheek ;) hahaha little bit of humour ... love and hugs Jayne x x x
Seren

Seren

16 years 6 months ago

Dear Big Sis

LOL the only carpet in my house is in my room .... will do my best not to ... thanks for the smile (huggles) and love Jayne x x x
Seren

Seren

16 years 6 months ago

Dear Annie

thanks for the wow's lol glad you liked it love and hugs Jayne x x
H

hushush8

16 years 6 months ago

re this

this is brilliant. you my kinda lady ma:am. smile, peter
Geezer

Geezer

16 years 6 months ago

Tasty lips...

Who could go to sleep, with you teasing like that? I'll bet he didn't! Cinnamon flavored lips eh? Nice to see you are in a better mood, and smiling like the Chesire Cat. Or the cat that ate the canary. LOL Higgest bugs and lotta love ~ Gee
Seren

Seren

16 years 6 months ago

Dearest Gee

This was one I wrote a while ago ... lol and I am a shocking tease apparently ... pmsl and I cant say what i am thinking hahaha love you my dear Sir Gee you gave me the biggest belly laugh ... love and hugs Jayne x x
Race_9togo

Race_9togo

16 years 6 months ago

Hey Jayne?

Rug burns ROCK. Just so you know. heeheeheeheeheehee... Respectfully Jim "Laws and rules don't kill freedom: narrow-minded intolerance does" : Race
Seren

Seren

16 years 6 months ago

Dear JimLMAO I have to agree

Dear Jim LMAO I have to agree ... carpet burns equate with a good time in my mind hahaha thanks for the giggle ;) love and hugs Jayne x x
Electric Blue

Electric Blue

16 years 6 months ago

Taste

This made me smile and I too long for the taste of cinnamon lips soft tremors kisses sliding to find their niche arousing amour Ectasy shouts but in shadows you whisper my name fingers hold fast as bodies morph into one glazed eyes honey dew drips from mouths wanting more more more! WoW I long for this oh do ! Amazing my friend You made me smile But did it make you smile my dear lady Jayne Blue
Seren

Seren

16 years 5 months ago

Dearest Maggie,Sorry I took

Dearest Maggie, Sorry I took so long to get back to you I only just noticed the comment and dont remember getting the email ... So happy you liked this one it was just a bit of fun, Tc Sweet lady (huggles) love and hugs Jayne x x
Electric Blue

Electric Blue

16 years 5 months ago

taste

My dear Lady Jayne I just love the new picture I am glad you like my poetry comment. I knew this once of my ocean blue eyes the taste never fades always Blue
Seren

Seren

16 years 5 months ago

Dear Magz

The new picture was given to me by a friend she reckons it reminds her of me lol ... the taste never fades does it huni ;) love and hugs Jayne x x
L

lyz

16 years 5 months ago

You have shocked.

Lol. They above seem to be at a loss for words, I am so laughing. Great to see some comic relief coming from your way. I very much enjoyed this and I want to know how many drinks did it take. Lol. Good one. Love Lyz. XX
Seren

Seren

16 years 5 months ago

Dear Liz

no drinks unfortunately ... wish I had lol but thanks for the read hun this one was a bit of fun to lighten a dark mood that had started to take over ... nothing like a shocker to snap a mood into another gear lol love and hugs to all Jayne x x x
Bonitaj

Bonitaj

16 years 5 months ago

what lines are these:

"Ecstasy calls with shouts and shadow whispers your name" That so capture the passion! Brilliant!! Boni
Seren

Seren

16 years 5 months ago

Dear Boni

This is just fluff next to you new one ... its really brilliant was a joy to read my friend many thanks for the visit and stars hugs and love Jayne x x x x
VO

Van Owen

16 years 5 months ago

Hot hot hot

Sounds like a fun romp. It is very sensuous and may help me get back to sleep ... eventually. Especially liked "Don't roll your eyes around, it is not time to sleep" Good Job, Hugs and more to you That SOB Van Owen
Seren

Seren

16 years 5 months ago

ARE you really a SOB ??

ARE you really a SOB ?? cause some of my best friends are SOB's lol thanks heaps for your comment ... this is one of the few rhymers I have writen lately so glad you enjoyed it .. many thanks for the visit and the smile lol :) love and hugs Jayne x x x
Pragyan

Pragyan

16 years 5 months ago

Jayne

WOW. It's just amazing. You gave me goosebumps. This poem is going to stay with me for a long time. :) Regards Pragyan
Seren

Seren

16 years 5 months ago

Dear Pragyan

Thanks for the read and the smile ... it was much needed tonight I am so happy you liked this one kind regards Jayne x x
Pragyan

Pragyan

16 years 5 months ago

:)

Well I can give you another smile. :) Considering I do that almost always. :)
Seren

Seren

16 years 5 months ago

Big Smile … lol crypitc

Big Smile ... lol crypitc one arent you hahah even bigger smile thanks Pragyan ... hope you have a happy new yr hun love and hugs Jayne x x
Pragyan

Pragyan

16 years 5 months ago

Jayne

Happy new year to you too. :)
Seren

Seren

16 years 5 months ago

Saluteee !!

ONly an hour an a half till new yr here .. I got a bourbon ... and I plan to be slightly silly at midnight lol hahaha ok pissed happy new year to you as well :) (huggles) and love Jayne-Chloe
Pragyan

Pragyan

16 years 5 months ago

;D

For me six hours and fifty minutes left. Mom is cooking a special dinner for tonight. You see I am back at home after six months. :) Have a blast and a great new year ahead. And keep people like me enchanted with your beautiful poems. :) Love and regards Pragyan.
Seren

Seren

16 years 5 months ago

Well I hope its a nice

Well I hope its a nice dinner ... six hours left you aint that far from me time wise lol ... I am having a blast and I will keep you as amused as possible ... im just starting I ahve a long ways to go yet lol (huggles) and love Jayne x x x
Pragyan

Pragyan

16 years 5 months ago

Nice indeed. :)

Dinner was great. :) May be you are starting, but you are awesome. All the best for the year ahead. Pragyan. :)
Seren

Seren

16 years 5 months ago

Dearest Stuart !!

ELLOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO Big Smile hows you ltns ... good to see you floating around hun and you better find that wandering mind huni you might need it for your next write lol hahha love and hugs Jayne x x x
Tam the Chanter

Tam the Chanter

16 years 5 months ago

40 centigrade

As a poem to the physical attractions of love, it is more than adequate, young woman,er, what was I saying ... oh, yes , I said to my beloved that I needed to make love to her badly, she said I usually did. You are such a hottie, Jayne, well done, great write. love Ian
Seren

Seren

16 years 5 months ago

Dear Ian I just roared

Dear Ian I just roared laughing after not uttering hardly a word for two days lol scared the shite outta everyone hahaha ... thanks for the compliment and hottie ?? lol hahha I am old dear man I am 40 but thank you anyway love and hugs Jayne x x x

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