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Dec 07, 2009
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Taste My Lips
Cinnamon flavoured lips
taste and tease free moans
tremors are starting low
as kisses are softly sown
lifting to fill your mouth
and sliding to find our niche
don't roll your eyes around
its not time to go to sleep
sliding the volume low
rising to meet the plains
Ecstasy calls with shouts
and shadow whispers your name
rolling the carpets edge
in fingers that grasp to hold
bodies become as one
and spooning begins the mold
I glazed your eyes in glass
and your mouth does drip in awe
baby you want a hand?
getting up off the floor
— Seren, Dec 07, 2009
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CyberSpace
16 years 6 months ago
:)
Seren
16 years 6 months ago
:D hahahaha just a smile huh
Kailashana
16 years 6 months ago
Oh, u tease u. Don’t you
Seren
16 years 6 months ago
Dear Mum
ziggy
16 years 6 months ago
hello
Seren
16 years 6 months ago
Dear Ziggy
Candlewitch
16 years 6 months ago
Dear Lil' Sis
Seren
16 years 6 months ago
Dear Big Sis
Seren
16 years 6 months ago
Dear Annie
hushush8
16 years 6 months ago
re this
Seren
16 years 6 months ago
LOL thanks Peter glad you
Geezer
16 years 6 months ago
Tasty lips...
Seren
16 years 6 months ago
Dearest Gee
Race_9togo
16 years 6 months ago
Hey Jayne?
Seren
16 years 6 months ago
Dear JimLMAO I have to agree
Electric Blue
16 years 6 months ago
Taste
Seren
16 years 5 months ago
Dearest Maggie,Sorry I took
Electric Blue
16 years 5 months ago
taste
Seren
16 years 5 months ago
Dear Magz
lyz
16 years 5 months ago
You have shocked.
Seren
16 years 5 months ago
Dear Liz
Bonitaj
16 years 5 months ago
what lines are these:
Seren
16 years 5 months ago
Dear Boni
Van Owen
16 years 5 months ago
Hot hot hot
Seren
16 years 5 months ago
ARE you really a SOB ??
Pragyan
16 years 5 months ago
Jayne
Seren
16 years 5 months ago
Dear Pragyan
Pragyan
16 years 5 months ago
:)
Seren
16 years 5 months ago
Big Smile … lol crypitc
Pragyan
16 years 5 months ago
Jayne
Seren
16 years 5 months ago
Saluteee !!
Pragyan
16 years 5 months ago
;D
Seren
16 years 5 months ago
Well I hope its a nice
Pragyan
16 years 5 months ago
Nice indeed. :)
Stuart Reiss
16 years 5 months ago
Hey Jayne….I very sweet
Seren
16 years 5 months ago
Dearest Stuart !!
Tam the Chanter
16 years 5 months ago
40 centigrade
Seren
16 years 5 months ago
Dear Ian I just roared
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