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adjei agyei-baah
Dec 16, 2009 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Color of the Unseen Beings

Who has seen God Before?

Neither you nor I

But when the artist is at work

God is seen as a whiteman

 

Who has seen Satan Before?

Neither you nor I

But when a play is being staged

Satan is seen as a blackman

— adjei agyei-baah, Dec 16, 2009

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weirdelf

weirdelf

16 years 5 months ago

Fair enough,

but a tad simplistic, Adjei. A pantheist sees god all the time and many see the devil at work in white skin. Still the simple structure works well to carry your message. Cheers, Jess, whose nature is irrepressible
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adjei agyei-baah

16 years 5 months ago

Thanks for the comment

Thanks for your insightful comment.You always expose me to the other side of the world I am not familar with.Have been learning from you all the time.
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lyz

16 years 5 months ago

Wow

Truthfully I have never noticed but a great write and insight. Well done. Love from Lyz. XX

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