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Dec 21, 2009
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Waiting
Awake in the desolate hour
plagued, consumed, vaguely broken
Seeking a ray of light
amidst my plight...
In transit
waiting for deliverance
Circumstances as this...
such testament
to human endurance
Open...
Waiting...
Yearning...
Knowing...
The intent will unveil
A solililoquy
yet its purpose
revealed to only me
plagued, consumed, vaguely broken
Seeking a ray of light
amidst my plight...
In transit
waiting for deliverance
Circumstances as this...
such testament
to human endurance
Open...
Waiting...
Yearning...
Knowing...
The intent will unveil
A solililoquy
yet its purpose
revealed to only me
— poet1, Dec 21, 2009
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